雅思寫作中有些錯誤是一定要避免的。比如下面這五個。
常見錯誤1: 單詞搭配不熟悉Students can reap the benefit from the advantages of technology in their study life.注意,這裡reap the benefit from是錯誤用法,正確用法是reap benefit by taking advantages of technologies in their study life.很明顯,這位同學並不清楚這個單詞的搭配,而且reap benefit屬於比較生僻的用法,能用是好事,可一定要確定用對,否則不如不用。
常見錯誤2: 單詞隨意使用Nevertheless, I convinced that traditional education method is a better way toprepare students for their in later life.注意,sb be convinced that是固定搭配,這種錯誤完全可以避免,同學在寫convinced that時就能注意到,這裡convinced的詞性顯然不對,這麼寫要麼是過去時,要麼是形容詞,倒推可發現,要麼時態錯誤了,要麼就是缺少了be 動詞,千萬不要在這麼基礎的地方犯錯。
常見錯誤3: 過多there be句型There are several controversies about whether it is too late to do anything toimprove the situation, which human activities have negative effects on ecologicaldiversity.注意,當你想表達哪裡有什麼,又覺得自己使用了太多次there be句型時,完全可以將它改為:there exist several controversies about…的句型,同時記住當後面是名詞單數形式,那麼使用there exists, 複數則使用there exist。這能很好的緩解重複there be的問題。
常見錯誤4: persons的複數概念及用法Most people were educated as independent person such as did washes andhomework by themselves when they were studying at school.注意,作者這裡寫的independent person原本是想表達獨立個體的意思。但卻忘記了句子開頭是most people,所以我們要使用persons。也許你想問,為什麼不用people呢?這裡原因有兩個:1. 句子開頭已經用了一次people, 再用就顯得累贅;2. persons可以用於academic essay, 它和people的區別是指,persons往往指的是多個獨立個體,類似於individuals, 而people則指的是一群人,一類人。比如: You are no longer just two independent persons, but on this day you have become one.
常見錯誤5: 觀點句描述事實題目是:In some societies, more and more people choose to live on their own.What is the reason for this, and is it a positive or negative trend?作者的回答: Living independently means that individuals should work hard tosupport themselves rather than rely on their parents, which also reduces theburden of their parents.作者認為獨立生活是個好的趨勢,因為個體為了養活自己而不靠父母,他們就必須很努力的工作。很顯然,這是一句事實而非觀點。獨立生活自然不靠父母,自然要自己努力工作了。更合理的寫法是:Living independently is seen to be positive in terms of personal skill developmentand economic perspective. People who live alone should work hard to supportthemselves rather than rely on their parents, which also reduces the burden of their parents.
今天就先說這五個錯誤,各位考鴨不妨對照下自己的作文,看看是否也存在這樣的問題。
當然,如果你想系統提升自己的雅思寫作能力;想早日拿到目標分,和雅思分手;但又怕花錢卻不見效果,那麼,下面這套雅思寫作保分課程可以考慮一下喲!(可先試聽感受教學效果)。
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