高考英語滿分作文是這樣寫「開頭」 「結尾」的,高分寫信作文模板

2021-02-13 高中英語滿分作文

一. 如何寫信件的開頭和結尾

英語寫信件的作文分為兩種:一種是收到來信寫回信;另一種則是直接寫信。

1. 收到來信寫回信的開頭:

    

    1)I’m so glad to receive your letter.

    我很高興收到你的來信。

    

    2)I’m very pleased to hear from you.

    收到你的來信我很高興。

    

    3)It has been a longtime since I hear from you last time.

    我已經很長時間沒有收到你的來信了。

    

    4)Haven’t seen you for ages. Glad to hearfrom you.

    好久不見,很高興收到你的來信。

    

    5)I am sorry it has taken me a long time to reply to your last letter.  

    很抱歉,這麼久才回你的上次來信。

    

    6)sorry to reply to your letter so late.

    抱歉這麼晚才給你回信。

    7)From your letter, Ilearned that...

    從你的信中我得知...

    8)Your letter reached/ came to me thismorning/yesterday...

    今天早上/昨天...我收到了你的來信。

    9)There is nothing happier to me than to receive your letter.

    再也沒有比收到你的來信更開心的事情了。

    10)I know you have trouble in...after reading your letter.

    在讀完你的信件之後,我知道你在...有困難。

    11)I have received your letter saying you...

    你的來信說道...

2. 直接寫信的開頭句:

    

    1)Haven’t seen you for ages, I’m writing to you to...

    好久不見,我寫信是為了...

    2)I’m writing to you on the purpose of...

    我寫信的目的是...

    3)I want to give you some advice on...

    我想給你一些關於...的建議。

3. 精彩的結尾句子:

    1)I’m looking forward to your early reply.

    期待你的回覆。

    2)Looking forward to your reply with the least possible delay.

    希望你在方便的時候及時回復。

    3) Please remember me to your wholefamily.

    請帶我想你的家人問好。

   

    4) Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.

    希望儘快收到你的回覆。

                                                                                       

二、如何寫建議信的開頭與結尾

1. 如何寫建議信的開頭

    

    1) I am glad to receive your letter asking for...

    很高興收到你的來信詢問...

    2)It is my pleasure to give you some suggestions on...

    很高興給你一些關於...的建議。

    3) With regard to the matter you mentionedin your letter, my suggestion is...

    關於你在信件中所提到的問題,我的建議是...

    4) Concerning your request, I would like to offer my advice.

    鑑於你的請求,我想提出我的建議。

    5) I’m writing to express my views concerning...

    我寫信時為了表達關於...的觀點。

    6)I feel it would behelpful/practical/appropriate if you...

    如果你...我覺得非常有用/切合實際/合適。

    7)I would very much like to advise you to ...

    我非常想要建議你...

    8)With regard to ..., I think you should...

    關於...,我認為你應該...

    9)I’m sorry to hearthat you are having trouble/ difficulties in....Such problems are quiteformal.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.

    很遺憾聽說你在...方面遇到了麻煩。這樣的問題是很正常的。也許以下的建議慧有所幫助。

    10)You have asked me formy advice with regard to how to...and I would like to share my opinions.

    你問我關於如何...的建議,我很樂意和你分享我的觀點。

    11)When it comes to...,maybe the following suggestions can help you.

    當提到...,也許以下的建議能夠幫到你。

    12) As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions.

    在我看來,採取如下行動是明智的。

    13) Facing these problems, I'm seized with fear and anxiety and I hope that you will be kind enough to help me.

    面對這些問題,我感到十分恐懼與焦慮,希望你能幫我。

 

2. 如何寫建議信的結尾

    1)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.

 我希望這些建議是切合實際的/有用的/有幫助的。

2)I would be ready to discuss this matterwith you in further details.

 我準備將和你進一步討論這個問題。

3)Please take my advice into account/consideration and make a final decision.

 請考慮我的建議並做出決定。

4)I would be more than glad if you can takemy suggestions.

 如果你能採取我的建議我將非常高興。

5)I hold the firm belief that you will make great progress as long as you insist what I have told you.

 我堅信,只要你按照我的建議堅持下去,你一定會取得巨大進步的。

6)I am looking forward to hearing good newsfrom you.

 期待聽到你的好消息。

7)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.

 我相信你會認真考慮我的建議的。

8)If you have any question or requirement,please do not hesitate to tell me.

 如果你有任何問題或者要求,請不要猶豫的告訴我。

9) If you have anything question, pleasefeel free to contract me at any time.

 如果你有任何問題,請隨時聯繫我。

0) I’m sure that any advice will be a big help to me.Your kind early reply would be greatly appreciated.

我相信你的任何建議都會幫到我。如你能及時回復,我將感激不盡。

 

3. 高考真題回顧

適用地區:河北、河南、江西、廣東、安徽、湖南、湖北、福建、山西

第二節  書面表達(滿分25分)
你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題,寫一篇短文參賽,內容包括:
1. 人物簡介;
2. 尊敬和愛戴的原因。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右;
2. 短文題目和首句已為你寫好。

There are many respectable people around us. ___
...

We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. 

When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.

來源:學科網

適用地區:重慶、甘肅、青海、西藏、黑龍江、吉林、遼寧、寧夏、內蒙古、新疆、陝西

第二節 書面表達(滿分25分)
上周末,你和同學參加了一次採摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文,介紹這次活動,內容包括:
1.農場情況;
2.採摘過程;
3.個人感受。
注意:
1.詞數100左右;
2.題目已為你寫好。
題目:My Weekend

Last weekend,we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.

假定你是李華,你和同學根據英語課文改編一個短劇,請你寫一封郵件給外教miss Veans,請他指導你們。郵件內容包括:情節簡介、指導內容、商定時間和地點。

Dear Miss Evans, 

I was wondering if you could help me revise a short play adapted from our English textbook. 

The plot of the tragic story is about Lady Meng jiang and her husband, who lived more than 2000 years ago in ancient China.At their  wedding,her husband was taken away forcefully to bulid the Great wall.Meng jiang went to look for her husband, only to learn of his death. Then she cried at the Great Wall,causing it to fall apart. 

Could you kindly give me guidance on two aspects? First of all, could you check the language for us? Secondly, if you could please give us some  direction on our acting and use of tone?

If possible, could I meet you in your office at 10  am? 

We are looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua

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第三部分:書面表達(共兩節,35分)
  第一節(15分)
  假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你們學校英語戲劇俱樂部外籍指導教師Jim因疫情滯留英國。復學在即,作為俱樂部負責人,你給Jim寫一封電子郵件,請他推薦一名外籍指導教師,內容包括:
1. 條件及要求;
2. 表示感謝並提醒注意防護。
注意:
1.詞數不少於50;
2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Jim,
-
- 
-
  Yours,
  Li Hua
  第二節(20分)
  假設你是紅星中學高三(1)班班長李華。居家學習期間,你們班開展了一次以「自律」為主題的調研活動。請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序,寫一篇英文稿件,給你們學校英文網站投稿,記述你在本次活動中發現問題並解決問題的過程。
  注意:詞數不少於60。
  提示詞:自律self-discipline

This unusual term witnessed a swift heart-shaking growth in our self-discipline,which was, is and will always be leaving a significant influence on our development.

With the unexpected COID-19 threatening our health and safety continuously,staying indoors and working online is a must-take defensive measure.We senior 3 students are just among those, who have no other choice but to manage ourselves at home by learning on the Internet.However, one day ,a survey came ,which showed an awful result that most of us had not made full use of this kind of resources,wasting much time playing online games or paying no carefulness to the required lessons.Immediately,being the monitor of our class, I frowned with endless anxiety.At dinner,a talk took place in my family,where my considerate father and mother put forward practical suggestions.With the purpose of strengthening self-discipline awareness together,I organized an online classmeeting ,stating a series of advice ,calling on everyone to improve our self-discipline and ending up with a regular rule.Finally came the time when three months flew away.A new survey showing our progress excited me greatly,with the result that I called my headteacher,telling him our long-expected achievements.Meanwhile,delight mixed with bits of satisfaction surged into his heart and mine.

It is owing to this special period that we have grown up rapidly.Nothing is impossible if we are determined enough to control ourselves and build self-discipline in any situation.

書信:介紹成人禮。1.回顧成長曆程;2.觀看校友抗疫視頻;3.自己的感受和未來期望。

1、成人禮:coming-of-age ceremony

2、Our ceremony fell on May 16.      fall on 在某一天舉行

3、 In China the age of 18 means we have grown up.    不能用18 years old 做主語

4、During the ceremony, dressed in Hanfu, a traditional dress (costume)of Han Chinese people, we performed/observed a series of rituals.  注意「穿著漢服」「行禮」的表達。

5、We got down on our knees/knelt down on the ground to our parents to express our thanks to them for raising us and bringing us up. 注意「下跪 」的表達。

6、We owe so many thanks to our parents.  owe sth. to sb. 「欠,欠恩、欠情」 

7、The ceremony is intended to make us understand the meaning ofmaturity and responsibility.   be intended to do 旨在

成人禮coming-of-age ceremony是在少男少女年齡滿18歲時舉行的象徵邁向成人階段的儀式,它標誌著告別孩童時代(childhood),進入成年期(adulthood)。在成人禮上,通常都要進行成年宣誓(take an oath to adulthood)。在中國一些地方,成人禮上還流行穿漢服(traditional Han costumes),祭拜孔子(consecrate Confucius)等習俗。

coming-of-age ceremony就是成人禮,是在少男少女年紀滿18歲時舉辦的象徵邁向成人階段的典禮。男孩要進行capping ceremony(冠禮),女孩要進行hair-pinning ceremony(加笄禮)。舉辦成人禮示意一個人已經come of age(成年),在閱歷了puberty(青春期)之後,實現了從adolescent(青少年)向youth(青年)的改變。

假如你是明啟中學高三學生李華,前幾日,你邀請你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公園一起欣賞露天音樂會。面對天氣惡劣、交通不便等原因,王磊一直猶豫不決。假如你是李華,請寫一封信說服王磊和你起參加。

Dear Wang Lei,

It’s been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I concerned, it’s still worth our efforts.

This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers』 autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert!

In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.

I am looking forward to hearing your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Wang Lei,

How are you doing these days? You』ve been hesitated to go with me to the open-air concert in the country park on Friday. It seems to me what’s holding you back is the terrible weather and the inconvenient transportation, neither of which, in my opinion, is obstacles. 

Firstly, there is no need to bother with things uncontrollable, such as the weather condition. We can make plans ahead according to the weather forecasting. If you are not confident with it, we can plan for both rainy day and sunny day. 

Secondly, mobile navigation apps can help us choose the best way, saving us from the trouble of worrying about the traffic conditions and the subways』 service time. Lastly, the most important thing is that this concert is such a major event that you would regret if you didn’t come. 

Besides, your favorite band will be performing! Wouldn’t it be  amazing to see your idols face to face and even get a chance to talk to them! 

Hopefully you will take my suggestion into consideration. And I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

 Li Hua

外教生病回國了,李華寫信詢問近況,分享班級最新情況,表達祝願。

讀後續寫。

Dear Linda

We're very sorry to hear that you're ill in hospital

We're all worried about you. Have you been getting much better now?

Please don't worry about your illness. What you have to do is to have a good rest and follow the doctor's advice. You needn' t worry about your lessons because the new lessons given these days are not so difficult. When you get back, we are all willing to help you make up the missing lessons at the weekend. Our head teacher along with our classis going to the hospital to see you next Monday.

I hope you will recover soon. Best wishes for you!

Yours

Li Hua

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