雅思寫作中常見10類連接詞錯誤
連接詞是雅思寫作評分中至關重要的一項參考標準,它不僅直接影響著Cohesion and coherence這一項分數,還間接影響了我們grammar的得分。今天小雅哥將為各位童鞋們介紹中國學生最常用也是最常錯的10個連接詞和表達,希望童鞋們能在雅思作文中避免此類錯誤的出現哦~
雅思表達常見錯誤1
On the other hand一般引導對比的東西,不等於besides, furthermore, secondly
錯誤例子:Many young people enjoy online shopping. On the one hand, it saves time. On the other hand, it saves money.
評講:save time和save money 是兩個並列的有點,沒有對比的關係,在這裡童鞋們最好用firstly和 secondly來表示這一併列關係~
雅思表達常見錯誤2
把On the contrary誤以為是In contrast的替換詞
錯誤例子:The birth rate rose. On the contrary, the infant mortality rate dropped.
評講:on the contrary 一般出現的語境是前面出現否定信息。這個詞組基本上不用於雅思作文。這裡烤鴨們要注意哦~
雅思表達常見錯誤3
把While, whereas誤認為是in contrast的替換詞
錯誤例子:The birth rate rose. While the infant mortality rate dropped.
評講:while 是從屬連詞,要連接兩個獨立的句子,這裡應該是「,while」或者改成「In contrast,」,烤鴨們,你們也有中招嗎?
雅思表達常見錯誤4
Besides, furthermore, what’s more, moreover, in addition被誤認為是「遞進」的連接詞
錯誤例子:Many people today choose to study in foreign countries. Besides, they can gain qualifications in foreign universities.
評講:besides一般引導兩個並列的觀點,不指代因果關係,這裡用「because of this」會比較合理。
雅思表達常見錯誤5
However常常被誤認為是on the other hand的同義詞
錯誤例子:Working from home has benefited many people. However, it can cause problems.
評講:however一般是轉折關係,也就是後面的句子意思往往代表作者的首要立場。而On the other hand一般是並列關係,也就是前後句子或者觀點沒有輕重之分,是並列的,一般是兩個事情的對比,而不是轉折。
雅思表達常見錯誤6
By doing this, in this way被誤認為是as a result, therefore, as a consequence 等
錯誤例子:Many people work long hours. By doing this, they may suffer poor health.
評講:一般by doing this, in this way都是用在人們有計劃地做某個事情,最後為了達到一定目的,或者效果。那麼,顯然不可能後面出現不好的結果,譬如說poor health。所以小雅哥在這裡建議童鞋們用As a result最好。
雅思表達常見錯誤7
As a result, therefore, thus, as a consequence 都是連接詞,而不是連詞
錯誤例子:Many people today prefer to use mobile phones to communicate with their friends, as a result, the face-to-face contact declines.
評講:as a result類似於副詞,沒有連詞的功能,所以前面要用句號或者;號~
雅思表達常見錯誤8
Thereby 不是therefore的替換詞
錯誤例子:Many libraries have Internet connection now, thereby, people can do research online.
評講:thereby的習慣用法是thereby+doing something,這個規則是不可以違反的,千萬不要以為thereby用了就比therefore高大上哦
雅思表達常見錯誤9
In order to 一般是表示有目的地去做某個事情,要注意邏輯主語,而且一般不會用否定
錯誤例子:Governments should not invest in the arts, in order to save money.
評講:烤鴨們有沒有覺得這個句子用否定讀起來很不通順。Governments should cut down on the spending on the arts, in order to save money.才是正確的用法。
雅思表達常見錯誤10
with如果加名詞,往往是表示「有了…」,後面一般不加負面的東西
錯誤例子:With pollution, many people will have health problems.
評講:pollution是不好的東西,用with很怪異,用because of會好一點。