一個模板剛剛出現，有可能明天就有100個人在用了，你想想當考官看到100個人寫出來的作文都用同樣的開頭的時候，他將會是什麼情景。當然這裡指的是國外的考官。國內的考官看到的時候可是很爽的，太棒了！又造出來一幫一模一樣的學生，加分點明確，可以給分了！
當面對重重阻力的時候，很多人不禁產生了懷疑。我們是否應該使用模板？使用模板是否會導致低分？我們到底該用什麼模板？其實答案很簡單，模板應該用，必須用，大膽用！
但是有一個十分重要的前提性條件，那就是模板一定是要原創的！原創的？！開玩笑，我們這輩子從來就沒自己思考過，一直都是老師餵到我們嘴裡的！是的，這就是你一直咒罵中國式教育的起點。其實很多滿分作文都是使用了模板，但是由於使用的十分之精巧，同時再加上是原創託福作文模板，因此連考官也拿他沒有辦法，人家寫的就是棒嗎！先來看兩段例子！第一段是不好的例子，第二段是好的例子。
Nowadays， thanks to the development of Internet， we are exposed to a vast ocean of information. Some argue that so much information brings a great benefit to our life and study. But for me， the experience with surfing Internet leads me to believe that accessing much information cause more problems than it solves.
Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at. I， given the chance， prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration.
當看到第一篇文章的時候，已經沒有了當初得的興奮，因為這樣的文章實在是太常見了！首先Nowadays這個單詞是被無數老師推崇的「高級」單詞。一直無法理解，為什麼有的單詞會更高級。然後thanks to節賓語，天吶！多麼明顯的模板！當我往下看的時候，我只能無意識的檢查是否有語法錯誤，沒有語法錯誤的話，我也就只能給個一般的分數就好了。
但是當看到第二篇文章的時候，初看覺得此文寫得不錯。用詞準確地道，而且完全是自己完成沒有模板，但是當我回頭再一回味這篇文章的時候，驚訝的發現，這篇文章竟然也是由模板所出！首先Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education。看似平淡無奇，但是實際上Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to就是一個模板，更厲害的是下一句！Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at.這麼長的一句話，竟然只有最後3個單詞不是模板！
然後再接下來，下一句的「given the chance， 」其實對於整句話來說根本就沒有任何實際上語義的改變！但適當加進來之後，我們會感覺到非常的地道！這篇文章身上完全看不出半點模板的影子，為什麼看不出作文模板的影子呢？就是因為這篇文章的模板是完全原創的，哪怕不是原創的，也是僅在小範圍內流傳的！而且這篇文章後面類似的妙手不計其數！
託福獨立寫作模版只是助你更快上手的，而不是拿高分的，高分託福寫作一定是有自己的語言特色，希望大家可以通過我的模板總結出自己的模板，這樣才能拿到高分的獨立寫作。
一、託福獨立寫作模版的用法：結構篇
1、開頭
Sample one(適用於有一些背景or有一個中心詞而且編得出來那個quotation的所有情況(二選一，agree or disagree，除了個別)；
On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(與科技有關的背景)，XX(中心詞) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很簡單的一句背景 ， However， people (universities， government， citizen， society， government，) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering：改寫題目1.Confucian (Yu Qiuyu， Mark Twain， William Shakespeare)， (one of) the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers (scholars， educators， writers， thinkers， statesmen)， has insightfully commented， 「___編____」I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this question：改寫題目2.
Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最後一定排比結尾，且如果字數夠了這一句就不要).
要做的：想一句簡單的背景+編一句名言+改寫兩次題目
Sample two：(如果sample one的名言編不出來或者不適合編如leisure time，就用下面的)
On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(與科技有關的背景))/ On account of …，XX(中心詞) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in… /XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很簡單的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also). However，when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whether改寫題目1， people get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective， I cling to an unshakeable belief that改寫題目2.以下最後決定怎樣寫：Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最後一定排比結尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about， first of all， to…； secondly， to…；and lastly…(3).
要做的：想一句簡單的背景+改寫兩次題目+總起(最後寫)
2、分點一：分層論證
Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from_______ is that__________/ First and foremost，
On one hand_________， On the other hand_________
Besides/ What’s more/ In addition.
這一段主要說理，在分論點裡可以加一些小的例子細節，重點是要用一些精華句子！
3、分點二：舉例論證
Further lending credence to my position is that____________
(簡單闡述/例子字不夠就多講點廢話)I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)/ A case in point is that(不是很典型)________，…..(例子見後面)
一句話總結例子：As a result，強調句/倒裝句/表利弊的句型/反面論證如果沒有會怎樣
4、讓步段：
Agree or disagree： Admittedly，_____，to some extent， may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments. For instance， _______
However， the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./
二選一：Admittedly， BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example， ____(字數不夠就多講點) However，BB 的缺點或AA也可以做到. Compared with AA， (which 可以總結所有優點或針對BB的一方面， )it pales.
5、結尾段：
Therefore， due to the above mentioned reasons， which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不夠了用)， I reinforce my stand point that 改寫題目3
Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________；
only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________；
and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______
Or It is A that...；it is A that...；and it is A that...(不好寫或顯得累贅就不要了)
二、託福獨立寫作模版的用法：語言篇
1、基本句型
l 因果
On account of/owing to/due to+ N
For the reason that/as/since+句子
It is due to____that
eg：It is due to his persistence and perseverance that he eventually reached his acme.(強調句)
derive/arise/stem from來源於
eg：His success derives from his persistence and perseverance.
ascribe A to B 歸結於
eg： His success can be ascribed/attributed to his persistence and perseverance
l 條件
A serves as a catalyst for B(our further success)
If/on condition that/provided that/as long as________
l 讓步
Despite the fact that/regardless of
2、 經典句型
l 倒裝
1) Only via(by/through /with/when/after) __do/did/can we__
ef： Only after going to the beach of Hawaii will I know about American typical type of spending leisure time.
2) Hardly/Seldom/Scarcely can__
ef： Hardly can we imagine a world/our life without/devoid of
3) So +adj+主謂倒裝+that__
4) Not only 主謂倒裝 but also...
eg： Not only should education prepare children to compete
Not only do people care their economic needs，they but also want to meet their spiritual needs.
5) On no account 主謂倒裝(決不....)
l 強調
It is/was....that/who(m)....
l 插入語
1) 限定性副詞 probably/directly or indirectly/to some(a large) extent
2) N+，ving，+v
3) 同位語
3、經典中的經典
l 排比
1) It is tourism that gives me the opportunity to know the culture of this dynamic， robust and alive country.
2) It is computers that make our life diverse，convenient，dynamic/ vibrant， without which our life would probably pale.
3) A/which needs to be/In this way， A can be readily accepted， respected，appreciated and advocated.
4) Only via university education can we have systematic knowledge concerning arts and science.Only via university education can we know the essence of symbiosis and collaboration. And Only via university education can we meet the demands of society and make our future success inevitable.
l 十大副詞
1) Considerably
2) Invariably
3) Undoubtedly/indisputably/incontrovertibly
4) Increasingly
5) Most/exceedingly/exceptionally 格外地
6) Insightfully 富有見底地
7) Regrettably
8) Effectively and efficiently
9) Gradually and eventually
10) Readily
l 其他
1) It is not difficult for us to imagine that 不難想像
2) B makes it possible for us to have an universal access to A/A is readily available. A容易得到
3) In order to survive and thrive in this fiercely competitive society， people have no choice but to work and study hard.
4) Ruthless and relentless無形/fierce and intense competition
The ruthless and relentless competition imposes an unprecedented pressure on each and every individual， and therefore，there is no exaggeration to say that our innovative and inventive ability can lay a solid foundation for our future， enabling us to survive and thrive in the modern world.
5) Inspiration， aspiration and perspiration
6) Vision，passion and mission
7) 其他詞語見最後清單p120
三、託福獨立寫作模版的用法：論證篇
1、模糊論證
Range from...
舉例論證
l 自己的例子
I can think of no better illustration than the example of my own visit to Singapore. Only after going shopping on Orchard road， the main shopping district in Singapore，did I realize what "a paradise for shopping"really was. Only after roaming in the City Hall，the financial center of Singapore， did I experience the quick pace of modern life. Only after lying on the beach of Sentosa did I know about the Singaporean typical way of spending leisure time.
l 名人的例子(Yu Minghong，。。。)
l 社會的例子
For example， on account of the advent of the technologically advanced society， employers tend to hire people equipped with a wide range of knowledge rather than the ones with limited knowledge.
l 瞎編的例子
2、數據論證
I can think of no better illustration than the statistic. Experts from the Department of Sociology in Peking University pointed out that the average sleeping time an adult has everyday， compared with 8 hours in the 1970s， has decreased to 6.8 hours due to the busy work and study.
3、引用論證(開頭)
4、假想論證
Imagine/visualize/picture/suppose ....
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