雅思數據類小作文主要包括:
Pie chart 餅狀圖
Line graph 曲線圖
Bar chart 柱狀圖
Table 表格圖
Combination 混合圖表
本文主要分析Bar chart數據類小作文的寫作技巧
Bar chart柱狀圖
考生在完成小作文時容易出現以下兩個問題:
一.是分不清楚動態圖與靜態圖的區別,即而找不到圖表中的有效數據,導致數據描寫過多寫成流水帳或是描寫數據過少無法完整表達整個表格內容;
二.是對於時間把握不準確,不知道重合入手,常常一不小心就超出20分鐘,導致小作文寫不完
小作文數據類別共分成兩種:靜態圖和動態圖。這不是由四種圖形(Table,Pie, Line, Bar)來決定的,而是由數據特徵來定。
如何判斷動態or靜態圖
在雅思考試中,線圖沒有靜態圖,一定是動態圖!
柱圖有動態也有靜態(常考動態變化);
餅圖有動態有靜態(餅圖動、靜都會考);
表格圖有動態也有靜態(常考靜態圖)
*主要是隨著時間的變化而變化的必是動態圖表,也是雅思考試趨勢中最常考的數據類小作文。
Bar Chart 寫作詞彙:
表達圖表中數據動態變化的名詞或動詞
1) 「數字數據」相關
(1) the number of sth.
(2) data, statistics, figures
(3) hundred, thousand, million, billion
(4) around, over, appropriately
2) 表達「上升」
(1)常見詞彙
increase → (名詞形式increase )
rise (不規則動詞rise→rose→risen) → (名詞形式rise)
grow (不規則動詞grow→grew→grown) → (名詞形式growth)
go up
注意以下短語數量上的區別:
increase by +數字上升到...
increase to +數字上升了...
reach to +數字達到...
(2)其他詞彙
climb : rise, usually slowly 爬升
leap : move or act quickly or suddenly 跳躍,劇增
rocket : increase very rapidly 迅速增加
(3) 地道表達
double, triple
3) 表達「下降」
(1) 常見詞彙
decrease (名詞形式decrease )
drop (名詞形式drop)
fall (不規則動詞fall→fell→fallen) → (名詞形式fall)
decline (名詞形式decline )
go down
(2)其他詞彙
plunge: fall steeply 跳水,猛跌
plummet: drop sharply 垂直落下
sink: to fall, drop, or descend gradually to a lower level 下沉,沉沒
dip: decline slightly and usually temporarily 下沉
4) 表達「波動」
fluctuate (名詞形式fluctuation )
go up and down
rise and fall
5) 表達「保持平穩」
remain stable (或 remain constant)
level off = move toward stability or consistency (趨向平穩)
3.描述數據變化方向和幅度的形容詞(配合名詞)、副詞(配合動詞)
1) 變化快、劇烈、明顯
dramatic, drastic, sharp, steep, quick, rapid, sudden, significant, considerable
2) 變化慢、微弱、不明顯
slight, moderate, modest, slow, marginal, gradually, steady
4.常用短語:「動詞配副詞」和「形容詞配名詞」
1) v. + adv.
decline slowly
grow dramatically
fluctuate sharply
2) adj. + n.
a slow decline
a dramatic growth
a sharp fluctuation
a slight increase
a significant increase
3) on a +adj.+ n
例如:如上述柱形圖所示,過去二十年間中國城鎮人口已經顯著上升。該句至少有以下兩種表達:
1)As is revealed in the above bar chart, the urban population in China hasgrow dramaticallyin the past two decades.
2)As is revealed in the above bar chart, the urban population in China has been ona dramatic growthin the past two decades.
*靜態Bar chart 主要用到的詞彙
take up/make up/occupy+最大/最少值
數據+more/less than的比較句型
寫作題目:
The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.
Writing analysis:
首先來構思一下段落結構
For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences
Writing structure:
· Introduction: 1 sentence
· Overview (summary): 2 sentences
· First 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences
· Second 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences
寫之前需要思考三件事:
- how you would paraphrase the question for your introduction如何在Introduction段複述問題
- what two things to include in your overview paragraph如何在Overview段總結兩點信息
- how to separate your description of details into two paragraphs如何將圖中的細節寫入兩個段落
Sample answer:
The bar chart compares the turnover in dollars from sales of video games for four different platforms, namely mobile phones, online, consoles and handheld devices, from 2000 to 2006.
It is clear that sales of games for three out of the four platforms rose each year, leading to a significant rise in total global turnover over the 7-year period. Sales figures for handheld games were at least twice as high as those for any other platform in almost every year.
In 2000, worldwide sales of handheld games stood at around $11 billion, while console games earned just under $6 billion. No figures are given for mobile or online games in that year. Over the next 3 years, sales of handheld video games rose by about $4 billion, but the figure for consoles decreased by $2 billion. Mobile phone and online games started to become popular, with sales reaching around $3 billion in 2003.
In 2006, sales of handheld, online and mobile games reached peaks of 17, 9 and 7 billion dollars respectively. By contrast, turnover from console games dropped to its lowest point, at around $2.5 billion.