從真題分析中學習寫作技巧
2015年的中考,是使用人教版新版教材的第一屆學生參加的中考,成都中考試題的難度「史上最大」,作文全市平均分據說只有4分左右,很多同學抓不住要點。近幾年的中考作文雖話題各有不同,但基本都需要學生從圖文中提取要點。請看下面的真題舉例分析。
【2015年成都中考】
請根據以下交通事故因素(factors) 統計圖表,以「Major cause of traffic accidents」為題,用英語寫一篇簡短的分析報告,向學校英語報投稿。
注意:
1. 首先開篇點題,說明當今交通事故越來越多;
2. 描述圖表一與圖表二的內容,闡述交通事故頻發的原因;
3. 闡述自己的觀點,可以包括:我們應該具備交通安全意識,遵守交通規則。
Major Causes of Traffic Accidents
The two charts show three major causes of traffic accidents. They are diver, road and environment and vehicle factors. Yet, driver factors are by far the greatest. The pie chart shows 85% of car accidents are caused by drivers while 10% by road environment and another 5% by vehicle itself.
According to the bar chart, driver factors are mainly speeding, drunk driving, driving when tired and not using seat belts. Speeding is the most dangerous action. Their percentages are 50%, 15%, 26% and 25%.
In my opinion, the drivers may be the biggest killers on roads. I hope every one of us can value life and follow the traffic rules for the safety of ourselves. The harder we try, the happier our life will be!
【2017年成都中考】
假如你是班長,今天是你班的英語活動日,你將帶領同學們騎車去Happy Park。請按照下面的圖示用英語寫一篇發言稿,在入園前向同學們介紹園區設施(facilities)的位置及遊園注意事項,並希望同學們遵守規則,玩得開心。
注意:
Dear classmates,
Attention please! Before entering Happy Park, let me give you a brief introduction to the rules and facilities here.
First, we should put our bikes outside the gate. Then, when we enter the park, we can see a large area of grass before us, but we can’t play football there. On the right is a toilet, and behind it is a swimming pool. We can swim in it. On the left, there’s a food stand between the flowers and some trees. Remember not to pick the flowers.
I hope everyone can follow the rules and have great fun here. That’s all. Thank you.
另外,2016年作文是根據「熊貓基地一日遊」的公告寫一篇短文,公告以圖文的形式給出;2018年作文是寫一篇日記,描述一副漫畫圖中女孩的一天;2019年作文的話題為如何利用詞典學習英語,也有圖文提示;2020年話題為關於新冠疫情防護,同樣是有圖文提示,並且還需填詞。圖文提示,既是要點提示,也是對學生分析要點能力以及作文構思能力的考查。因此,第一步審題尤為關鍵,也必須在寫前列好提綱。
下一篇文章將給大家總結一些常考熱門話題以及好用且加分的詞彙和句型。