最全整編!2020高考英語書面表達匯總:附點評+範文

2021-02-23 高考英語


全國Ⅰ卷適用地區:河南、河北、山西、江西、湖北、湖南、廣東、安徽、福建

全國Ⅱ卷適用地區:甘肅、青海、內蒙古、黑龍江、吉林、遼寧、寧夏、新疆、陝西、重慶

全國Ⅲ卷適用地區:雲南、廣西、貴州、四川、西藏

全國新高考Ⅰ卷適用地區:山東

全國新高考Ⅱ卷適用地區:海南

2020年高考自主命題地區:北京、天津、上海、江蘇、浙江

你校正在組織英語作文比賽,請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題,寫一篇短文參賽,內容包括:There are many respectable people around us.                                  點評:全國I卷書面表達要求學生以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題寫一篇短文,引導學生關注身邊平凡而又偉大的人物。We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.For me, the most respectable person round me is my best friend, Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in my class, who is crazy about reading, learning and helping other people.There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him. First and foremost, needless to say, he is good at English, for he has lived in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student. Additionally, no one can deny he gets along well with all our classmates, enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and is always ready to help others. Last but certainly not least, he has a lot of life experience, considering that he has been serving as vice monitor for many years.Hopefully, I could become an outstanding person like Li Hua. I have the confidence that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.上周末,你和同學參加了一次採摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文,介紹這次活動,內容包括:點評:全國Ⅱ卷書面表達設置和同學一起去農場參加採摘活動的情境,引導學生在真實的生活體驗中感受勞動的辛苦和榮耀,尊重勞動,認同勞動,並且願意學習和參與勞動。Last weekend,we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.請你為學校舉辦的5公裡越野賽跑活動寫一篇報導,內容包括:A 5000-metre race, part of the Sports Festival of our school, was held by the school students』 union last Sunday.150 participants from three grades were involved in the race. Among the most of the participants were students and teaching staff. The racing route started at the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill.It turned out to be a great success. Not only does it build up our body but it also enriches our school life.假定你是李華,你和同學根據英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教Miss Evans寫封郵件,請她幫忙指導。郵件內容包括:I an Li Hua, and I'm writing to ask if you could help me and my classmates in changing our text into a short play.Our play will be based on the text "horse". The text tells a story of a king and an artist. In the story, the king asked the artist to draw him a beautiful horse, misunderstood the artist, and in the end forgived him because of his effort. Me and my classmates are struggling with the lines of the play, as we always stumble over pronounciations. We will have a rehearsal next Wednsday afternoon in the school hall, and I hope you can come and give us some advice.Please consider our request. I look forward to your reply.假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你們學校英語戲劇俱樂部外籍指導教師Jim因疫情滯留英國。復學在即,作為俱樂部負責人,你給Jim寫一封電子郵件,請他推薦一名外籍指導教師,內容包括:假設你是紅星中學高三(1)班班長李華。居家學習期間,你們班開展了一次以「自律」為主題的調研活動。請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序,寫一篇英文稿件,給你們學校英文網站投稿,記述你在本次活動中發現問題並解決問題的過程。I am very sorry to hear that you have to stay in Britain because of the coronavirus.As we are about to begin school, our English drama club needs a temporary teacher to direct us. We need a teacher who is a native of English speaking countries and has experience in English drama. Could you recommend a teacher to us?Please do not loosen protective measures, and take care of yourself.I am Li Hua, the class leader of class one, grade twelve. During the pandemic, students in our class carried out a research about self-discipline. At first, the efficiency of the students were very low, and greatly affect the learning outcomes of students. To solve this problem, me and some of the students met offline for a brainstorm meeting. After coming up with possible solutions, all classmates had an online meeting during which we decided on a specific plan. After carrying out the plan, the study results of all classmates saw obvious increase, and our teacher was happy with the result.假如你是明啟中學高三學生李華,前幾日,你邀請你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公園一起欣賞露天音樂會。面對天氣惡劣、交通不便等原因,王磊一直猶豫不決。假如你是李華,請寫一封信說服王磊和你起參加。It’s been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I concerned, it’s still worth our efforts.This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers』 autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert!In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.I am looking forward to hearing your reply.How are you doing these days? You』ve been hesitated to go with me to the open-air concert in the country park on Friday. It seems to me what’s holding you back is the terrible weather and the inconvenient transportation, neither of which, in my opinion, is obstacles.Firstly, there is no need to bother with things uncontrollable, such as the weather condition. We can make plans ahead according to the weather forecasting. If you are not confident with it, we can plan for both rainy day and sunny day.Secondly, mobile navigation apps can help us choose the best way, saving us from the trouble of worrying about the traffic conditions and the subways』 service time. Lastly, the most important thing is that this concert is such a major event that you would regret if you didn’t come.Besides, your favorite band will be performing! Wouldn’t it be amazing to see your idols face to face and even get a chance to talk to them!Hopefully you will take my suggestion into consideration. And I’m looking forward to hearing from you.1、成人禮:coming-of-age ceremony2、Our ceremony fell on May 16. fall on 在某一天舉行3、 In China the age of 18 means we have grown up. 不能用18 years old 做主語4、During the ceremony, dressed in Hanfu, a traditional dress (costume)of Han Chinese people, we performed/observed a series of rituals. 注意「穿著漢服」「行禮」的表達。5、We got down on our knees/knelt down on the ground to our parents to express our thanks to them for raising us and bringing us up. 注意「下跪 」的表達。6、We owe so many thanks to our parents. owe sth. to sb. 「欠,欠恩、欠情」7、The ceremony is intended to make us understand the meaning ofmaturity and responsibility. be intended to do 旨在成人禮coming-of-age ceremony是在少男少女年齡滿18歲時舉行的象徵邁向成人階段的儀式,它標誌著告別孩童時代(childhood),進入成年期(adulthood)。在成人禮上,通常都要進行成年宣誓(take an oath to adulthood)。在中國一些地方,成人禮上還流行穿漢服(traditional Han costumes),祭拜孔子(consecrate Confucius)等習俗。coming-of-age ceremony就是成人禮,是在少男少女年紀滿18歲時舉辦的象徵邁向成人階段的典禮。男孩要進行capping ceremony(冠禮),女孩要進行hair-pinning ceremony(加笄禮)。舉辦成人禮示意一個人已經come of age(成年),在閱歷了puberty(青春期)之後,實現了從adolescent(青少年)向youth(青年)的改變。以中國題材紀錄片為寫作話題,要求學生分析中國題材紀錄片受到外國朋友歡迎的原因。The documentary Dufu made by BBC, which deals with life experience and poetry creation of this great master, wins widespread recognition among foreigners. Its exquisite production also captures Lijiang and Suhua's heart.Why does such Chinese documentaries as Dufu appeal to foreigners? Firstly, China's rising international status and groundbreaking development catch the whole world's attention. These curious audiences long to probe the underlying reason behind. Therefore, they turn to some iconic figures like Dufu for an answer. By exposing themselves to this great poet's life experience, foreign audiences are better acquainted with Chinese political, ideological and economical system, thus gaining a better insight into contemporary China and its rapid growth.Secondly, the high-quality production of BBC also contribute to Dufu's popularity. BBC poured tons of effort into translating Dufu's poems, shooting his birthplace and famous historical sites such as Xian and inviting famous British actor Mckellen to cast as Dufu. All these efforts made the inaccessile poems easily understood by the western audience.To conclude,considering western viewers' curiosity about China as welll as BBC's fine production, the popularity of Dufu among foreigners is no coincidence.假如你是李華。你校愛爾蘭外教Peter因病回國休假。請你給他寫一封電子郵件,主要內容包括:1.詢問Peter近況;2.告訴Peter班級最新消息;3.表達祝願。注意:1.詞數80左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student from Class Three, Grade Three. I can't tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that you had to return to Ireland on sick leave. I'm wondering if you are getting better now. And I'm writing to show our genuine concern for your health.Through your tireless work, every one of us has made tremendous progress in English, especially in listening and speaking. So don't worry about our study and all you need to do now is have an adequate rest and a healthy diet. Besides, with the approach of the college entrance exams, we are busy making final preparations. Good news is that we have achieved satisfactory results in a mock examination. We are sure that we will live up to your expectations.We earnestly hope you will recover soon and we are expecting your early return to China. Best wishes!We're very sorry to hear that you're ill in hospitalWe're all worried about you. Have you been getting much better now?Please don't worry about your illness. What you have to do is to have a good rest and follow the doctor's advice. You needn' t worry about your lessons because the new lessons given these days are not so difficult. When you get back, we are all willing to help you make up the missing lessons at the weekend. Our head teacher along with our class is going to the hospital to see you next MondayI hope you will recover soon. Best wishes for you!書面表達部分落實了立德樹人的根本任務,體現了高考的育人功能,考查學生在面對生活問題情境時,運用科學的思維方式和方法去認識問題、分析問題和解決問題。應用文要求考生解決復學在即,外教滯留英國無法按時到崗的問題。情景作文要求考生解決中學生居家學習自律性差的問題。考生在面對問題情境時,需要運用科學的思維,合理的方法來解決問題。情景作文的題目設置也會使考生「照鏡子」,反思自己居家時的自律情況,體現了高考的育人功能。書面表達的交際場合設置明確,符合考生的認知水平,交際語境符合學生身份,考查了考生的綜合語言運用能力,引導考生使用英語做事情,體現了英語的應用性。應用文中,考生需要結合生活實際,合理地用英語寫出被推薦人的條件和要求,貼近考生的生活實際,體現了用英語做事情。情景作文要求考生寫一篇以「自律」為主題的調研活動過程,符合當前的疫情下學生居家學習的社會環境和學生的身份。書面表達繼續保持選擇性和開放性的特點,為考生展示個性、思維的多樣性提供了廣闊空間。應用文題目要求中涉及外籍指導教師的條件和要求,但是具體的內容並未羅列,這需要考生展開積極的、合理的、有邏輯的思考完成寫作任務,為考生提供了展示自我能力的機會。情景作文需要考生不僅具備較紮實的語言功底和表達能力,也需要考生展開想像,提供合理的細節內容。

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