距離高考還有28天!
高考英語作文滿分為25分,佔總分數的16%。如果作文分數能達到20分以上,就能輕鬆將許多考生甩在後面。對於基礎較好,又想通過英文作文提升分數等級的考生來說,下面的高分點撥技巧很有用處哦!
重視開頭和結尾句
「鳳頭豹尾」巧表達。好的開始是成功的一半,高考英語書面表達的開頭句一般已為考生寫好。考生要做的是自然地銜接過渡到要表達的主體部分。很多低分考生多是首句就寫得不盡人意,或中式表達,或用詞不當,或拼寫出錯。其實,以套語或俗語開始比較客觀、有力,也更容易給閱卷老師留下良好印象,評分定高檔。因此首句一定要寫得漂亮、無誤,是謂「鳳頭」。以下為用於句首提出論題或現象的句型:
① Recently, ... has become the focus of the society.
② ...has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.
③ Nowadays there is a growing concern for...
④ Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ...
⑤ There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes ...
⑥ Opinions are divided on the question.
結尾部分在書面表達中佔有很重要的地位,因此,寫好結尾回扣主題,給閱卷老師留下一個完整的印象十分必要。好的結尾能使全文增色,是謂「豹尾」,是得高分的亮點。例如:
① If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
② In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
但是,實際寫作中,許多考生卻不知如何來結尾,原本一兩句話就能很圓滿地完成寫作任務,往往節外生枝,畫蛇添足,結果因表達不當、低級小錯反而留下扣分、降檔的可能。因此,要熟練掌握一些用於結尾的常用句型:
① From what has been discussed / mentioned above, we may conclude that...
② Therefore, it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that...
③ It is high time that something was done about...
④ From all the reasons / considerations above, it is evident / clear / obvious that...
⑤ Taking into account all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that...
⑥ From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that...
⑦ All in all, what really matters is, in fact, to...
⑧ In my opinion, we should attach more importance to...
高級詞彙
適當地運用「高級詞彙」能讓句子更加亮眼,可以是高考考試大綱詞彙表中諸如熟詞新義之類的詞彙,或高考考試大綱詞彙表之外通過閱讀而積累的適合寫作的詞,通過構詞法而生成的詞等。
Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is beneficial to you.
本句使用了高級詞彙 additionally, beneficial。
高級短語代替單詞
在英語寫作過程中,要牢記短語優於詞彙的觀念。
Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.
take advantage ofuse。
高級句型
適當地使用同位語、非謂語動詞、with 的複合結構、獨立主格結構、省略等手段,使句子得以精簡。
While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists』 works. 本句使用了「while+ 現在分詞」充當狀語。
適當地使用倒裝句、強調句等,使句子多樣化,突出重點。
By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.
not only… but also 連接兩個句子,第一個句子需要用部分倒裝。
It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.
it is…that 構成強調句。
當然,還有其他的更多句型,等著你去探索,高考還有不到一個月的時間,這段時間要回歸基礎,保證會做的題不丟分,這就是高考的勝利,加油!
參考:
王正勳. 亮眼句子,高考英語寫作加分項[J]. 高考金刊, 2017, 000(012):73.
孔祥霞. "鳳頭豹尾"巧表達——高考英語書面表達高分策略[J]. 新高考:英語進階, 2012.