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在歷年四級考試作文話題中,關於辯論性的話題(加上6月份剛剛考過的四級作文)出現了4次,由下圖可以看出,這類話題在歷年四級作文中出現的頻率也很高。
再來回顧一下歷年四級作文中的社會熱點話題
Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
My views on Online Shopping
我們就以今年6月份的四級作文On Excessive Packaging為例,具體分析下如何來寫好這類作文。這次作文又回歸了傳統的寫作題型:英語題目+漢語提綱。
題目:On Excessive Packaging
提綱:
1. 目前很多商品存在過度包裝現象
2. 出現這一現象的原因
3. 我對這一現象的看法和建議
本次作文的話題是「過度包裝」,話題不算很新,考生對這類話題應該很熟悉。作文要求中給出了提綱,那麼大家寫好本篇作文的關鍵就在於緊跟題目所列提綱:現象—原因—看法和建議,來確定相應的寫作結構。要重點分析產生此現象的原因是什麼,羅列出最重要的兩三點。最後結尾處別忘了給出自己的看法和建議。
用三句簡單的英文來總結一下怎樣構思這類作文:
1. Describe the phenomenon
2. Talk about the causes of this phenomenon
3. Express your attitude and give people some suggestions on solving the phnomenon of...
但大家在寫作中不能太死板,構思的形式可以多樣化,只要能保證這三點,其他就可以按照自己的方式來,一定要調理清晰,還可以使用長短句交錯的方式,這樣節奏便較為明朗。用詞也不能太頻繁,可以換著同義詞來寫,這樣就不會讓你的作文看起來太「乾燥」。
我們一起來欣賞一下下面的11個範文吧,取長補短,讓自己的寫作水平快速提高。
範文1
Nowadays, the phenomenon of excessive packaging of goods is prevalent in our society. Wandering in the supermarkets, one might be dazzled by the fancy packaging of goods on the shelves. Although the government has concerned with the issue, the phenomenon still flourishes.
The reasons can be listed as follows. First, manufactures believe that they can attract customers』 attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by means of over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. Second, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold the opinion that the more exquisite the package is, the better the quality will be, which encourages excessive packaging. In addition, most of this kind of goods are brought and sent as gifts to their relatives or leaders.
To my mind, excessive packaging can do harm to our society, for instance, it can result in the loss of precious resources and the shortage of energy. In the light of the disastrous consequences mentioned above, every citizen should be aware of the problem, and laws or regulations must be made to restrict the behavior of excessive packaging of manufactures.
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