英語寫作能力不強是中學生普遍存在的問題，因此今天學習哥給大家分享一篇初中英語作文專項分析，來攻克英語寫作難題！快收藏這份高分秘籍！
書面表達是中考的必考題型，主要考查考生的書面語言能力，考查考生是否具備較強的語言操作能力。它是英語知識的高度綜合運用，是一種創新思維的體現，靈活性強，必須以紮實的英語基礎為前提。它應符合以下要求：
1.中心明確
一篇好的文章，最起碼的條件是有統一性，即主題思想明確。引用的每個材料，寫的每一句話都要緊扣中心，為中心服務。寫作時一定要牢記一篇文章只有一個中心，確保文章前後一致，主題明確。如某中考題要求根據兩幅畫的提示寫一封回信，介紹學校的變化。有的考生一開始就點題：學校發生了翻天覆地的變化（Many great changes have taken place in this school.）。而從後面的語句看，並沒有將變化的「巨大」體現出來，上下文矛盾，根本沒抓住「巨大變化」這個中心。
2.連續流暢
中考書面表達要求文章語言通順流暢。因此，句與句之間、段與段之間的銜接、過渡應自然，層次要分明，合乎邏輯。寫作文時，要善於運用過渡詞使文章過渡自然、和諧統一。如果考生恰當地使用了then，after，until等詞來連接上下句，會使文章更通順、流暢。
3.語言得體
「人靠衣裝，零散文靠框」，文章的內容要靠語言來組織、表達。
（1）寫作時應儘量避免使用冗長、複雜、易犯錯誤的句子，用簡潔、精練的語句表達，做到言簡意賅。
（2）寫作前把要表達的內容整理歸納，理清思路，做到條理分明，要點齊全，切忌逐詞逐句按漢語方式翻譯，生編硬造。
（3）寫文章不是記流水帳，在能清楚表達文章內容的前提下，儘量措辭有加，不時出現「閃光點」，這將為你的文章增光添彩。
1.應用文，包括啟事、通知、書信、日記、e-mail等形式。
2.圖表式作文，多為介紹說明性質，所以基本時態一般為一般現在時。一般性況下，題目會給出提示句。
3.話題作文，通常會給出一個確定的主題及簡單的要求，只要抓住主題所體現的中心思想，不出現拼寫、語法錯誤，語言流暢，有文採即可。
一、善於用銜接句
①表示列舉和順序：
first, second, third ...; firstly, secondly, thirdly ...;
for one thing ... (and) for another (thing);
to begin / start with, next, then,
finally / last / lastly / last but not least
②表示舉例：
like; for example; such as; as you know;
as we all know
③表示語義增進和引申：
again; also; and; and then; besides;moreover;
in addition; what's more; what's worse
④表示對比和轉折：
but; instead; however; still; though; although; yet;
while; on the one hand ... on the other hand ...
⑤表示語義等同和改變說法：
similarly; in the same way; in other words;
that is; that is to say
⑥表示過渡和總結：
now; by the way; all in all; in short; in a word
⑦表示結果和推論：
as a result; for this/that reason; in that case; so;
therefore...
二、句式應多樣化
①用狀語從句：
As soon as I see him, I'll tell him the news.
He didn't have supper until his parents came back.
I was so angry that I couldn't say a word.
He is such a kind man that we all like him.
We didn't feel tired though / although we walked a long way.
The boy saved every coin so that / in order that he could buy his mother a present on Mother's Day.
You may use the dictionary as long as / so long as you keep it clean.
用定語從句：
The girl who often helps me with my English is from England.
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
②用感嘆句
What a wonderful film we saw last night!
How hard he works!
③用被動語態
I'm not allowed to go out at night.
Who was praised by Miss Li?
The old must be taken good care of.
④他句型的使用
By doing ..., you / we can ...
I'm not sure whether / if ...
I think / suggest you should ...
In order (not) to ..., you / we should ...
三、使用諺語為文章增色
Actions speak louder than words.
行動比語言更響亮。
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患難見真情。
A friend is easier lost than found.
得朋友難，失朋友易。
A good beginning makes a good ending. / Well begun is
half done.
好的開端是成功的一半。
A good book is a good friend.
好書如摯友。
A man becomes learned by asking questions.
不恥下問才能有學問。
A mother's love never changes.
母愛永恆。
A thousand mile trip begins with one step.
千裡之行，始於足下。
Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.
自信是走向成功的第一步。
四、注意篇章結構
合理布局一般為三段式：
開始部分——說出文中的要點、核心問題。
正文部分——圍繞主題開展敘述、討論。
結尾部分——對全文的總結和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之間必須是有機地聯繫，覆蓋所有命題要點、連貫。前後呼應，去除與主題無關的內容。書寫工整，字跡優美，高分必備！
應用文
1.假如你是李磊，你的美國筆友Tom對中國傳統文化很感興趣。請你用英語給他寫一封80 詞左右的電子郵件。介紹一兩個中國的傳統節日、如春節、中秋節等。
優秀範文
Dear Tom：
I am very glad to tell you something about spring festival.It’s a traditional festival in china. It comes in winter.
It’s time to get new. We usually clean and decorate our houses carefully before it comes. I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes. We put>It’s time to say goodbye to the last year, and say hello to the New Year. Everyone goes home to get together with their families, no matter how far it is. They must have dinner together on that day. They must visit their relatives and friends and say 「Happy New Year」 to them. When the kids greet their grandparents, they can get money.
Yours,
Li Lei
2.假如你叫李明，是一名中學生，經常收聽由美國主持人Philip主持的音樂節目，請根據內容要點提示，用英語給主持人寫一封信。
要點：1. 你很喜歡這個節目，特別是節目播放的歌詞很優美，是很棒的英語歌曲。
2. 在你學習感到疲勞時，會打開收音機聽這個節目。
3. 從節目中你學到了很多單詞。
4 告訴他你最喜歡的是什麼類型的音樂，請他幫助你介紹一些相關的歌手和CD。
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Dear Philip,
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I often Listen to your program at night. I like it very much,especilly the English songs.
I like the English songs that have great lyrics. Every night , I will turn on the radio and listen to your program when I feel tired. It helps me relax myself. By the way，I have learnt many English words from these songs.
At last, I like singers who can sing clearly and write their own songs. Can you introduce me some singers and their CDs? You can send me e-mail at Liming@yahoo.com.
I am looking forward to hearing you. Thank you very much!
Yours
Li Ming
圖表式作文
1.親愛的同學，初中三年的英語學習中，《牛津初中英語》教材給我們提供了大量寓教於樂、生動活潑的閱讀素材，伴隨我們成長，請以"English Textbooks are Good Friends"為題寫一篇短文參加學校的英語作文競賽.
要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫
2）必須包括表格中所有的相關信息，並適當發揮；
3）詞數：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；
4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。
English Textbooks are Good Friends
English textbooks play an important part in our study of English.
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English textbooks play an important part in our study of English.They are good materials for us to learn English well.They can not only open our minds but also make our school life colourful.We've learned many wonderful things in the world in our textbooks，which help us get a better understanding of different cultures around the world and grow into an excellent person.Some famous people we've learned affect us a lot. My favorite one is Audrey Hepburn，a great American successfuactress，who devoted much of her time and money to charity.l've learned a lot from her.
2.請根據寫作要點和要求完成作文，並將答案寫在答題卡的相應位置上
人們表達愛的方式各不相同，請根據以下表格的信息寫一篇短文
【寫作要求】
①詞數90左右；
②文中需包括所有寫作要點，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當加入過渡語句，使短文通順、連貫
③不能照抄原文，文中不能出現考生真實姓名和學校名稱
People show love in different ways.
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People show love in different ways.In Europe，people often say"I love you"to their parents，children or friends.
Parents and children often hug each other.But in China，people are not good at expressing love in words.In the past，parents were usually serious in front of their children.
People also perform quite differently on festivals.In Europe，fathers always buy flowers and presents for mothers on Mother's Day. In recent years，under the influence of western culture，people have also gradually expressed their love for their parents through Father's Day or Mother's Day.
3.最近，你們班就「是否應該幫助陌生人」展開了討論，同學們就這一話題意見不一，你的看法如何？根據所提供的信息，以"Should We Help Strangers?"為題，寫一篇短文。
原因
贊成
幫助他人是美德；
幫助他人就是幫助自己。
反對
怕陷入麻煩；
怕被誤解。
你的觀點?（至少兩點）
要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括表格中所有的相關信息，並適當發揮；
3）詞數：100左右（徵文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；
4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。
參考詞彙：美德 virtue
Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．
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Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers. Different students have different opinions.
Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue, and helping others is helping ourselves. We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day. If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them, it's hard to imagine what our world will be like.
However, some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble. Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness．
In my opinion, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble. If everyone tries a little kindness, our world will be full of love.
話題作文
1.假如你是李華,是一名初中生。隨著科技的發展,iPad已成為中學生的新寵。用iPad既可以聽音樂,閱讀純文本電子書,又可以玩電子遊戲。請你用英語給某英語報社寫一篇短文,談談中學生使用iPad的利弊。短文內容必須包括以下幾點:
1. 使用iPad對學習的好處;
2. 對課堂紀律和學習可能產生的負面影響;
3. 提出自己的建議並說明理由。
Is iPad good or bad for middle school students
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I’m a junior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and they think it’s a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, it’s helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.
Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.
In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.
2.沉迷網路遊戲
李華總是沉迷於玩電腦遊戲，影響了學習。作為他的好朋友，你打算怎麼幫他呢？請用下面所給的提示詞寫一篇不少於80字的短文。要求字跡工整，語言流暢。
提示詞：give up, concentrate on, be (become) interested in
優秀範文
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly, I think it's very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.
If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
3.怎樣學好英語
世界在發展，文化在交融，英語已經成為人們溝通的橋梁。怎樣學好英語是我們一直在探索的問題。通過幾年的學習，你一定積累了許多成功經驗，請從聽、說、讀、寫四方面談談你的建議。
要求：1. 詞數：800—1000詞
2. 字跡工整，語言流暢，表達準確，邏輯清晰。
How to Learn English Well?
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English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you'll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It's good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep on writing diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.