英語作文評分原則
1. 總分為20分,按5個檔次給分。
2. 評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言質量初步確定其檔次,然後以該檔次的要求來衡量,確定或調整檔次,.
最後給分。
3. 評分時應考慮:內容要點的完整性、上下文的連貫、詞彙和句式的多樣性及語言的準確性。
4. 拼寫、標點符號或書寫影響內容表達時,應視其影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞彙用法均可接受。
5. 詞數少於80, 從總分中減去1分。
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環境保護篇
01
新冠病毒
2020年,一種新型冠狀病毒 (novel coronavirus ) 在全球蔓延。據傳,這種病毒是從野生動物傳染給人類。假定你是李華,你校英文報「人與動物」欄目擬刊登主題為「保護野生動物」的短文,邀你投稿。要求如下:
1. 介紹野生動物的現狀;
2. 獵殺野生動物的後果;
3. 提出自己的建議。
注意:
1. 詞數120左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
參考詞彙:
生態系統 ecosystem
新型冠狀病毒 novel coronavirus
傳染性的 infectious
★ 範文
Protection of Wild Animals
At present, as a consequence of human activities, many wild animals are endangered. Worse still, some of them may disappear forever.
There is no doubt that hunting wild animals has a bad influence. For one thing, it causes the imbalance of our ecosystem. For another, it leads to the spread of infectious diseases from animals to us human beings, such as SARS and novel coronavirus.
As far as I am concerned, something must be done to stop this illegal act. Nature reserves ought to be built so as to offer more living space to wildlife. What's more, we should never have wild animals for food, as they are part of environment.
02
拯救地球
地球是我們人類共同的家園,人類只有一個地球。「低碳、環保」已成為當今時代主題。目前,我市英語學會準備在全市專科學生中開展以「Save(拯救)our earth」為主題的英文徵文活動。現請你根據以下三個方面的提示,寫一篇120詞左右的短文參評。
1. 重要性:只有一個地球
2. 主要問題:汙染、疾病、災難
3. 措施:停止汙染、保護大自然
參考詞彙:
disaster n. 災難
protect v. 保護
注意:
(1) 文中不能出現真實姓名、校名;
(2) 文章標題已給出,但不計入總詞數;
(3) 可適當發揮,以使行文連貫。
★ 範文
Let's Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.
So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave; Do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.
Let's act now from everything to save our environment. Don't let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!
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學術文化篇
03
沉迷網路遊戲
李華沉迷於電腦遊戲中,影響了學習。作為他的好朋友,你打算怎麼幫他呢?請用下面所給的提示詞寫一篇不少於120字的短文。字跡工整,語言流暢。
提示詞:
give up
concentrate on
be (become)interested in
★ 範文
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly, I think it's very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.
Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.
And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.
If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
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怎樣學好英語
世界在發展,文化在交融,英語已經成為人們溝通的橋梁。怎樣學好英語是我們一直在探索的問題。幾年的學習經歷你一定積累了許多成功的經驗,請從聽、說、讀、寫四方面談談你的建議。
要求:
1. 詞數:120詞(開頭已給出,不計入總詞數)
2. 字跡工整,語言流暢,表達正確,邏輯清晰。
★ 範文
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us.
Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you'll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others.
Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It's good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
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素質教育篇
05
如何減壓讓生活更美好
許多學習生活中的煩惱都會使人產生壓力,為了更好地發現及解決同學們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班特意開展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"為主題的英語演講比賽,請你準備發言稿,談談你的一些緩解壓力的好辦法,與同學分享。
內容包括:
(1) 同學們中普遍存在的壓力是什麼;
(2) 我的壓力是什麼;
(3) 我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。
注意:
文中不得出現真實的姓名和校名。詞數120。
★ 範文
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I'm always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last.
So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That's all. Thank you!
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現代生活篇
06
怎樣保持健康的生活習慣
健康的生活習慣對於成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認為健康的生活習慣應當是怎樣的呢?請根據下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。
信息提示:
健康飲食;
早睡早起,不熬夜;
參加運動,強身健體。
要求:
根據信息提示,把握要點,適當發揮,不逐字翻譯;
字數在80詞左右。
★ 範文
I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy.
First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health.
Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.
Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don't feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
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畢業感想
專科生活馬上就要結束了,三年的專科生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經過和事後你的感想 (請不要寫出真實的學校名稱以及真實姓名)。
提示詞語:
three years
memories
one of
one day
think
happy / sorry
★ 範文
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.
I had so many memories in three years' life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I've become interested in English and I'm good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I've learned a lot from her.
I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
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與父母相處
假如你是Han Mei,下面是一封你的筆友Alice給你發來的e-mail,請你根據e-mail 的內容給她寫一封回信,與她交流看法,並幫她排憂解難。
提示詞語:
listen to
mother's love
care about
communicate with
get along with
smile
寫作要求:
語句通順,書寫工整;
可用所給提示詞語,也可以適當發揮;
詞數在120左右。
Dear Han Mei,
I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, "Be careful while crossing the street."「Put on more clothes.」「Did you do a good job at school?" And so on. I'm annoyed (煩惱). What shall I do?
Alice
★ 範文
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother's you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about. If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Yours
Han Mei
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社會經濟篇
09
低碳生活
現在全世界都在倡導「低碳生活」(low-carbon life),即:降低二氧化碳的排放,採取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。低碳生活對我們大家都有好處,請你寫一篇短文向一家英文報社投稿。內容包括:你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。
提示詞語:
be good for
everyone
ride a bike
think
make a difference
environment
suggest
reuse
★ 範文
Low-carbon life is good for everyone.
To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.
Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.
So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we'd better not spend much money on expensive clothes.
If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.
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網購
隨著社會的發展,網上購物成為一種新型的購物方式。請根據下表提示,談談網上購物的利與弊。
要求:
語句流暢,書寫規範;
包含提示內容,並可適當發揮;
詞數80左右,首句已給出,不計入總詞數;
文中不能出現人名、地名等真實信息。
Advantages
方便(convenient)
24小時營業
不用排隊
Disadvantages
看不見物品
容易受到欺騙 (be cheated)
不能享受和朋友一起購物的樂趣
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now.
★ 範文
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don't have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day.
However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can't actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.
In conclusion, we should make proper use of the Internet shopping.
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人生哲理篇
11
幸福
幸福是什麼?幸福是父母為你營造的溫馨的家,幸福是老師望向你的讚許的目光,幸福是孤獨時朋友送來的一杯奶茶,幸福是…… 請以My happiness為話題,寫一件曾經發生過的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求:
條理清晰,語言流暢,用詞準確, 字跡工整,120詞。
★ 範文
Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: 「It doesn't matter, my child. Remember we'll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!」 I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents' love. I want to be a good child for my parents.
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興趣愛好篇
12
愛好
★ 範文
My Hobby
I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am busy with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.
One of my favorite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can learn a lot. Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xun, I come back to the old time of China.
I am sure to continue reading, so I can lead a colourful life.
13
興趣
★ 範文
My best subject
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.
But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.
I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
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交友篇
14
我最好的朋友
★ 範文
My best friend
My best friend is Jack. He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class.
His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home.
He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well. He gets on well with us, so everyone in our class likes him.
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旅遊交通篇
15
旅遊介紹
介紹首都北京
請你閱讀你的加拿大網友Tommy的e-mail,根據e-mail的內容,給他寫一封回信.
Dear Li Lei,
I haven't heard from you for a long time. I'm glad to tell you that I'll visit Beijing this summer vacation.
It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Tommy
★ 範文
Dear Tommy,
I'm glad to know you will come to Beijing. Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 2008 Olympic Games.
Now, people pay more attention to the environment. More trees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. What's more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
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交通問題
越來越多汽車進入我們的家庭生活,改善了我們的生活,但同時也帶來了很多問題,如堵車和車禍,給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。作為學生,我們應該怎樣做呢?請寫一篇有關交通安全的短文(120字左右)
內容包含:
遵守交通規則,如走人行道 / 過斑馬線;
別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球;
勸父母不能酒後駕車;
你可以適當增加內容,讓短文通順,過渡自然。
參考詞彙:
sidewalk 人行道
zebra-crossing 斑馬線
註:
第一段已給出,不計入總詞數
★ 範文
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on sidewalks, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, and then go across fast. Don't play football on the road. we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
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傳統文化篇
17
傳統節日介紹
假設你是劉偉,你的美國朋友MIKE 想通過你了解中國的傳統節日。請你根據提示,給Mike 寫一封e-mail,向他介紹我國傳統節日春節的情況。
內容提示:
1. 春節是中國最重要的傳統節日;
2. 春節期間人們的主要活動(節前、除夕、節日期間)
Spring Festival
traditional
decorate
on the eve of the festival
get together
set off fireworks
lucky money
根據中文大意和英語提示詞語,寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少於120詞的短文。所給英文提示詞供選用。注意:不要寫出你的真實姓名和校名。
★ 範文
Dear Mike,
How are you? I'm really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I』d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days.
Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish each a happy year and good luck. How happy we are.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Liu Wei
寫作必備萬能句匯總
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回信類作文句型
01
開頭部分
How are you?
How's everything going?
How are things with you?
I'm writing to you about...
I'm writing to tell you something about...
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I'm glad to have received your letter.
It is my great pleasure to hear from you.
I'm pleased to hear that you're coming to China for a visit.
I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
02
結尾部分
I'm looking forward to your reply.
I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes!
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作文必備的實用句型
03
1. It is obvious that
不用說 / 很顯然
2. Of all the …
在各種……之中
3. There is no doubt that
毫無疑問
4. As is known to all
眾所周知
5. From my point of view
我個人認為
6. Personally
我個人認為
7. As far as I am concerned
在我看來
8. As far as I know
據我所知
9. When it comes to...,
說到……
10. With the increase / growth of the population
隨著人口的增加……
11. With the advance of science and technology
隨著科技的進步……
12. It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that …
……是必要的
13. It is important (for sb.) to do / that …
……是重要的
14. It is proper (for sb.) to do / that …
……是適當的
15. spend … on sth. / doing sth.
花費
16. it takes sb. some time to do sth.
花費
17. If you don't ..., you'll ...
如果你不……,你就會……
18. so … that …
如此……,以至於……
19. I think / I don't think that …
我認為,…… / 我認為……不
20. I wonder whether …
我想知道是否……
21. I suggested that you should (not)…
我建議你……
22. …is also a good way for you.
……對你來說也是個好辦法。
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作文必備的諺語
04
1. Every coin has two sides.
任何事物都有兩面性。
2. Failure is the mother of success.
失敗是成功之母。
3. Practice makes perfect.
熟能生巧。
4. Actions speak louder than words.
事實勝於雄辯。
5. A good beginning is half done.
良好的開端是成功的一半。
6. Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today.
今日事,今日畢。
7. Time and tide wait for no man.
時不我待。
寫在最後
未來可期,你要努力。
記得一直加油,最好的,總會在最不經意的時候出現。