【健康類】
Scientists believe that eating fast food is harmful to one’s health. Some people think that education can help them change that bad habit. Others, however, argue that education does not work. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 科學家認為吃快餐有害健康,有人認為教育可以幫助人們改變這個不良習慣,有人認為教育不起作用, 討論兩種觀點。(2010年12月11日雅思考試題目 )
【薛鵬點評】討論兩種觀點,可以使用第一人稱口吻,也可以使用第三人稱口吻。
【作家立場】保障健康飲食,教育是起到一定的積極作用,但是,健康飲食不能僅僅依靠教育。
【思路拓展】
①青少年是快餐的主要消費者,快餐含有過多的糖分、脂肪、熱量,長期食用有害健康。所以,青少年應該成為教育的主體。
②為了減少快餐對於消費者的不良影響,除了教育以外,政府也該承擔責任。例如,美國政府已經限制肯德基捆綁銷售兒童套餐的商業行為。
【範文賞析】
【首段】背景介紹+ 作家立場
So prevailing are the fast foods that some teenagers are in the habit eating junk foods nearly every week. From the perspective of some nutritionists, too much intake of sugar, calorie and fat is undoubtedly health-threatening, for fast food, in most cases, is low in nutritional value. People differ greatly in their views as to how to foster wholesome dietary habit. As I see it, educating the public about the dangers of unhealthy eating, regulating baneful sales and food advertisements to children and lowering the price of healthy foods should be used together to help people keep fit.
【二段】
Granted, one effective way to promote a healthy diet is to educate people about the potential risks of unhealthy diet. Modern people might opt for healthier meals and snacks if they are taught that fast foods are high in salt, fat and sugar. To illustrate, I myself changed my unwholesome eating habits after watching television programs on how to preserve health. Also, while it is of great significance to educate adult eater, schoolchildren should be main target for education because they are not only in their formative years but also the regular eaters of fast foods.
【三段】
In addition to education, other ways to promote healthy eating are not far to seek. First, methods should be adopted to strictly censor those junk food advertisement aiming at children. Meanwhile, bundle sale of children』 meals by giving out gift toys ought to be banned. Virtually, American has already enacted relevant legislations to restrict such sale promotion of KFC and Mcdonald's. Also, it is imperative for the governments to ensure that healthy foods are cheaper so that people could afford to buy the wholesome foods. Imaginably,the decreased price of fresh fruits and vegetable could enable more people to enjoy healthier foods.
【尾段】
Overall, education could aid people to change bad eating habits. However, it also works to restrain the improper publicity and sale of fast food restaurant as well as lower the price of wholesome foods
【小鵬哥語料庫】
1. So prevailing are the fast foods that some children and youngsters are in the habit of eating fast foods nearly every week. 快餐是如此流行,以至於很多孩子或青少年現在有每周幾乎吃快餐的習慣。
【拓展】prevailing = prevalent = popular adj 流行的
2. wholesome = healthy = sound adj健康的
3. junk foods n垃圾食品
4. alter one’s dietary habit = change one’s eating habit v 改變一個人的飲食習慣
5. be detrimental to health = undermine one’s health v有害健康
6. is a health-threatening practice v有害健康的做法
7. be conducive to one’s health = conduce to one’s health = is beneficial to one’s health v有益健康
8. keep fit = stay healthy v保持健康
9. is low in nutritional value v營養價值很低
10. contribute to obesity = give rise to= overweight = lead to fatness v導致肥胖
11. bundle sale n捆綁銷售
12. avoid too much intake of sugar, calorie and fat v避免太多的糖分、脂肪、熱量的攝入
13. Healthy food should be made cheaper. 健康食品應價格低廉
14. The advertising of junk foods aiming at children should be reasonably regulated 針對兒童的垃圾食品廣告應該被合理規範
15. inspire encourage people to eat natural foods v鼓勵人們吃天然食品
16. foster reasonable and regular dietary habit v培養健康規律的飲食習慣
【拓展】foster = cultivate = develop v 培養
17. make people have a deeper insight into how to acquire balanced nutrition v 加深人們對於獲得均衡營養的洞察
18. It is imperative for the government to call on wholesome dietary habit. 號召健康飲食,對於政府而言勢在必行。
19. Personal importance should be attached to the sanitation of eating and drinking 個人應該重視飲食衛生。
20. On no account can we ignore the immense value of health management, no matter how busy we are. 無論我們多忙,我們不能忽視健康管理的巨大價值。
【拓展練筆題目】
People should look after their health as a duty to the society they live in rather than personal benefits. Do you agree or not agree? 保持健康是盡到了社會責任,不是對於個人有益,是否認同?
作者介紹:
薛鵬(@雅思小鵬哥),新東方網專欄作家,高中時代出版詩文集《選擇堅強》,每年創作20萬字原創語料庫以及範文。吉林大學外國語言學及應用語言學碩士。17年英語教學經驗 (7年新東方雅思託福SAT教學經歷),前長春新東方功勳教師,多次培訓出雅思和託福高分學員(雅思寫作8.0分,託福寫作29分)。
愛生活,愛運動,愛音樂電影,愛旅行美食,愛讀書攝影,更愛英語教學。20歲登上英語講臺,主講英語萬詞速記課程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各級別詞彙教學。
大一時即在報刊雜誌上主持「英語學習系列談」以及「薛鵬教你學單詞」等專欄。2006年獲得「外研社/朗文杯」新概念背誦大賽吉林省賽區大學成人組冠軍,全國總決賽大學成人組二等獎。
對於各類寫作課程有精深研究,授課方式行雲流水,妙語連珠,知識底蘊深厚,對學員極具有啟迪性和激勵性。
教學理念:Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注滿一桶水,而是點燃一把火)
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