Weekly Activity 2 - Participle Phrase

2021-02-20 溫州肯恩大學英語語言中心

INCORRECT: Disappointed almost to the point of tears, an empty test tube was the worst outcome possible. 

In this example, what the participle phrase modifies is missing.

CORRECT: Disappointed almost to the point of tears, the professor founded that the test tube was empty.

INCORRECT: Sitting on the park bench, the sun disappeared behind the clouds. 

Where is the noun that sitting on the park bench modifies? It is not modifying sun or clouds, but a person.

CORRECT: Sitting on the park bench, I watched the sun disappear behind the clouds.

INCORRECT: Speeding through the tunnel, the station came into view. 

The station was not speeding through the tunnel, and there is no noun that speeding through the tunnel modifies.

CORRECT: Speeding through the tunnel, the train approached the station.

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