今天考試大陸題目真題+範文 7+
這個題目有點難,而且我預計未來還會考,題目不是新題,2015,March在其他國家考過
我覺得今年還會再考類似的話題,希望所有同學認真學習
來不及錄視頻了,我們下周會具體講解這個題目,
我再重點的地方做了標記
我腦子裡面想了一下10mins 的abc,按照新的課程L4的固定模版寫的.速度好快 :D
Some people think having many TV channels is good because it gives people many choices, however some believe having a lots of TV programs is bad, because it only results in bad quality TV programs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are conflicting views about whether a large number of television channels is a blessing or a curse-deteriorating the quality of programs. This essay will discuss both opinions, followed by my own perspective on this matter.
37 words
2 mins
People who believe that this phenomenon has positive effects may put forth the following reasons. Firstly, more information can broaden the audience’s horizons. Different television channels cover a wide range of topics ranging from politics, education, culture, sports, and entertainment, which inform us of the most updated news in all facets of life, thereby expanding our views. Additionally, compared to people living in countries with limited television channels such as North Korea, citizens, such as Europeans, who can access more television channels tend to be more broad-minded and capable of analysing an event from different perspectives to avoid biases. This is because one event may be reported with different comments from different channels, exposing viewers to a variety of opinions.
121 words
6 mins
這個段落,你們都知道是論證A-C,用舉例子啦:D 和之前講解的
看廣告降低identity,是1個類型
舉例子的部分已經標記
However, opponents who think that the availability of TV channels has adverse effects on television programming quality may also have persuading arguments. To begin with, the fierce competition caused by this trend forced creators to compromise quality to gain 「popularity」. For example, in China, it is the increasing number of television channels that made them competing against each other more intensively, leading to the explosion of 「Reality Shows」 that are neither educational nor meaningful. However, they never fail to catch public’s attention. (強調句)Also, to keep the market share, more and more channels imitate others』 ideas, which has undermined the originality and creativity of television programs. For instance, in China, if it were not due to the rising number of television channels, there would not have been so many copycats of popular foreign programs aimed at luring more audiences as the original shows did overseas. (虛擬語氣,3rd conditional :D )
144words
15 mins
寫到最後一個reason的時候,感覺可以寫一個3rd conditional,時間應該OK,就改了原來的例子..
字數多了,因為我想用虛擬語氣....
你們可以刪掉最後一個例子,或者改成過去時態的舉例子
第二個body 寫完,發現時間不夠了..馬上瞎編了一個結尾,我一般兩個body寫完,使用20min
In my opinion, both the arguments above have sound reasoning and evidence. As an audience, we need to be cautious about our choices and avoid squandering our time with shows that are of low quality.
2mins
35words
25 mins writing
343 words total
反思
1.不寫10mins planning 可不可以?
我覺得,如果你的abc已經很熟悉了,可以不寫,比如我的body1,真的很順暢
Body2這種,不熟悉的論證,還有例子,我建議還是寫一下,因為改寫例子的時候,的確浪費了時間
2.如何減少語法錯誤
我每篇正式的範文都會讓外教批改,這篇的錯誤,只是TV 應該寫成 television.
最後一段,aiming for, 被改成了aimed at .. : (
語法錯誤比以前少很多,給自己2mins 檢查很重要!寫的時候,一定要非常有意識主語謂語搭配,其實Body1,我有很多插入語,很容易出現對應錯誤,我以前經常會有這樣的插入語,對應錯誤,這次特別注意了:D ,大家可以用同樣的方法,在寫作的時候重點關注自己常錯的語法點
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