新東方何蕊:2014年12月四六級全解析-四級寫作

2020-12-23 新東方網

  2014年12月20日,大學英語四六級考試結束當日,新東方網四六級頻道第一時間更新公布英語四六級真題答案,並特別邀請多位新東方教師為廣大考生進行考後試題解析。同時廣大考生還可隨時@新東方網四六級微博,與線上老師以及考生隨時互動答疑,最後新東方祝廣大考生在此次考試中取得優異成績!

  2014年12月四六級全解析:四級寫作

  此次四級寫作共3套真題:

  1.A course that has impressed you most in college

  令你印象最深的一門大學課程

  2.A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college

  對你影響最大的一位大學同學

  3.A campus activity that has benefited you most

  使你受益最深的一項校園活動

  寫作部分沿用今年6月份考試出題形式,依舊反壓題,看似很難,沒有出考生預期的圖畫、圖表作文,但如果考生在考試之前做過6月真題,拿到題目之後不會很棘手。(在此再次強調真題在複習備考中的重要性!)

  補充:2014年6月四級寫作真題

  1.Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to China. Which place will you take him to first and why?

  2.Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown. Which place will you take him to first and why?

  3.Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your campus. Which place will you take him to first and why?

  任何一篇應試寫作,閱卷老師都會從語言、結構、內容這三個方面來整體考察一篇文章,下面我們就從這三個方面具體來談談此次四級寫作。

  【結構】

  由於四級寫作字數要求較少,120-180字,所以考生寫出三段即可,且任何類型的作文,無論是提綱作文,圖畫作文還是圖表作文,最終都是要回歸到這三段論中,即:

  第一段:引入話題或現象(此次directions中直接給出話題,可直接引出話題,無需通過描述圖畫、圖表等間接引出)。

  第二段:分析原因或影響(務必加入firstly, then, finally等連接詞;不會說抽象理論時舉例子)。

  第三段:總結個人觀點或提出建議措施(取決於現象或觀點的正面與負面)。

  【內容】

  內容就是文章的思路,簡單點說,就是文章的第二段是怎麼拓展的、論據是什麼。四級寫作對思路拓展的要求非常低,與話題有關的任何一句話都是論據,不要求這些論據之間有極強的邏輯性。

  那麼這些思路到底怎麼去拓展呢?建議考生以後拿到任何一篇四級寫作,從個人和社會兩個層面來拓展思路即可,個人層面又可從學習、生活、工作等角度來分析,社會層面可從經濟、政策、社會生活等角度來分析。

  【語言】

  四級寫作旨在考察考生的語言表達能力,想拿高分,語言方面必須要下功夫。考生常用的important、good這些詞要會替換,也需熟練運用一些特殊句型如倒裝、強調等。

  【參考範文】

  第一篇(A course that has impressed you most in college)

  During my four academic years in college, no other courses can be more impressive to me than the American History course from which I do benefit a lot.

  A number of factors can account for the significance of this course to me. To begin with, this course takes us into a world that is totally different from ours and thus broadens our horizons. Then, as the old saying goes, histories make men wise. Through this course, our knowledge can be dramatically widened. Last but not least, the professor is very considerate and always offers his help to us whenever we need.

  From what I have discussed above, I believe that you must have already been interested in this course and want to experience it. I strongly recommend it to you, and as to myself, under no circumstances can I forget the far-reaching effect it has on me.

  第二篇(A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college)

  During my four academic years in college, it is my roommate, Li Hua, who has influenced me most and helps me a lot.

  The reasons why she is so important to me are as follows. Firstly, she is not only intelligent but also hardworking. She is always the earliest one to attend the class and helps me with my studies. Besides, she is very considerate. No matter who needs help, she always gives her hands to her/him. Moreover, she is very active and passionate. She engages in various activities outside of the classroom and leads us to win all kinds of games and thus gain a good reputation for all of us.

  From the evidence above, we may draw a conclusion that Li Hua is very excellent and outstanding. I must try hard to behave like her and will never forget her in my whole life.

  第三篇(A campus activity that has benefited you most)

  During my four academic years in college, I have engaged in various kinds of activities, but what has benefited me most is the one that is held on Fridays in the English Corner.

  The reasons are as follows. Firstly, through this activity, I can practice my oral English with those native speakers and improve my language competence. Besides, I can meet a large number of foreign friends there. We share our experiences with each other. In this way, we can know different cultures and develop our intercultural flexibility. In addition, through the communication, my interpersonal skills can also be enhanced.

  I have already benefited a lot from this activity, without it, I would not achieve my progress. I strongly recommend it to all of you and I believe it will not let you down.

  教師檔案

  何蕊

  新東方合肥學校國內考試部教學教研主管,英語專業八級,授課威風凜凜,貨真價值嚴師一枚。

  教授課程:四級寫作、六級聽力、考研寫作

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