高考就要來了,您的書面表達複習地怎樣啦?本期給大家帶來的是全國各地模擬考的優秀英語作文匯總,如果把這些題練好,高考時就能輕鬆拿高分!
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假如你是某國際學校的學生會主席李華, 為了促進中華名族傳統文化的發展,你校最近成立了漢語戲劇社團.請你用英語給在你校做交換生的Chris寫一封電子郵件,邀請他參加該戲劇社團.內容包括:
1. 活動的目的和意義;
2. 擬開展的活動;
注意:1.詞數100左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【參考範文】
Dear Chris,
How are you? In order to promote the development of traditional Chinese culture, our school has set up a Chinese drama club. It aims to enrich students' school life and arouse students' interest in dramas.【高分句型一】(活動的目的和意義) Some experts and performers will be invited to give lectures on dramas and there will be live performances of some dramas that are popular among the youth.【高分句型二】If you are interested in dramas, you are welcome to join the club. You will have a chance to learn acting skills from famous actors or actresses in person. (介紹擬開展的活動並且邀請對方參加)
Looking forward to your reply soon. (期盼回信)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【試題分析】
本文是一封電子郵件。為了促進中華名族傳統文化的發展,你校最近成立了漢語戲劇社團.請你用英語給在你校做交換生的Chris寫一封電子郵件,邀請他參加該戲劇社團.內容包括:活動的目的和意義;擬開展的活動。要認真閱讀前面的提示,認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關係,然後確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。根據所列要點,並以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想像力,寫作時注意時態、語態的合理運用,主次分明,詳略得當,語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展,按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【名師點睛】
本文是一封電子郵件。格式正確,內容符合要求,層次分明,結構布局合理,文中使用高級句子。In order to promote the development of traditional Chinese culture, our school has set up a Chinese drama club. 此處是動詞不定式做目的狀語;Some experts and performers will be invited to give lectures on dramas and there will be live performances of some dramas that are popular among the youth. 句中使用一般將來時態的被動語態;If you are interested in dramas, you are welcome to join the club. 句中if引導條件狀語從句。
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假定你是李華,你在報紙上看到你市電視臺今年七月將舉辦外國人「學做中餐,樂享中國菜」才藝大賽。你的外教Peter非常喜歡中國廚藝,你建議他去試一試。請按以下要點給他寫信告知此事,並表示可以提供幫助。
1.比賽時間:7月15日;
2.報名時間:截止到6月30日;
3.報名地點:市電視臺。
注意:1.詞數100左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【參考範文】
Dear Peter,
I read in newspaper today that a 「Learn Chinese Cuisine, Enjoy Chinese Foods」 Foreigners' Talent Show will be held in my city Television Station on July 15th. I know you like Chinese cooking, and you are free during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your cooking talent, and how well you' ve learned Chinese cooking. If you would like to try, you' ll have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【試題分析】
考查提綱式作文。寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱,因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示,認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關係,然後確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。根據所給提綱,列出要點,並以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想像力,靈活運用英語知識,採用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來,注意主次分明,詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】
I read in newspaper today that a 「Learn Chinese Cuisine, Enjoy Chinese Foods」 Foreigners』 Talent Show will be held in my city Television Station on July 15th.這句話運用名詞性從句。文章還用了一些短語,如:would like to,sign up,more than等等。最後,文章注意了語句的銜接,如and;if;before等連接詞起到很好的連接上下文的作用,使文章讀起來自然流暢,朗朗上口。
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假定你是李華。英國交換生Lucy發現紅色在中國使用很廣泛,她想更多地了解我國對紅色的使用情況。請根據提示給她寫一封信,內容包括:
1. 我們對紅色的理解;
2. 經常使用紅色的場合;
3. 不宜使用紅色的場合。
注意:1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3. 信的開頭語和結尾已為你寫好。
【參考範文】
Dear Lucy,
I' m Li Hua. I' m writing to tell you something about Chinese's using the colour red.
We do like red, for red stands for happiness and good fortune in our culture. Therefore, you can see people wear red clothes and hang red lanterns during the Spring Festival. And the senior citizens even give their grandchildren some lucky money in red envelopes. Besides, young couples are also dressed in red on their weddings. However, be sure to avoid wearing red clothes during some sad events, such as attending funerals and visiting some patients. If you do so, it is really rude. I sincerely hope my explanations will be of great use for you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【試題分析】
本文屬於材料作文中的應用文。首先確定文章的主題(我國對紅色的使用情況),並圍繞主題進行構思,列出簡單的提綱:我們對紅色的理解;經常使用紅色的場合;不宜使用紅色的場合。再用連詞鋪設好過渡,安排好層次段落。最後根據主題來擴展成文。要靈活運用各種句式、分詞短語、介詞短語等,注意使用高級框架結構的句子,用好連接詞。
【亮點分析】
本文要點完整,文章層次分明。使用各種連詞如,therefore,besides,however等,使文章層次分明,思路清晰,從而增加文章的可讀性。本文句式簡單句為主,同時運用了一些結構相對複雜的從句。如並列句We do like red, for red stands for happiness and good fortune in our culture.,這個並列句中含有一個強調謂語動詞like的強調句型:We do like red。祈使句be sure to avoid wearing red clothes during some sad events, ….。以及if引導的狀語從句If you do so, it is really rude. I sincerely hope my explanations will be of great use for you.。這些句式的運用讓文章的結構錯落有致。
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假定你是李華,正在組織一次題為「我的中國夢」的校級英文演講大賽。請你給外教Terry寫封郵件,邀請他擔任評委。內容包括:
1. 時間和地點;
2. 準備工作:簡要了解「中國夢」的背景;
3. 表示感謝並期待回復。
注意:1. 詞數100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【參考範文】
Dear Terry,
I' m Li Hua, an activist in your spoken English class. To motivate our school students' enthusiasm of speaking English, I' m organizing an English speech contest entitled 「My China dream」 in our school conference hall on January 10, 2018. Most of the preparations about the contest are ready. However, we are short of an expert in this field like you to be a judge. So I' m writing to you for help. I know you always have a busy schedule, but I' d greatly appreciate it if you could be kind to come. Besides, you are expected to briefly learn about the background of 「China dream」.
Looking forward to your reply soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【試題分析】
首先審題,這篇文章要求假定你是李華,正在組織一次題為「我的中國夢」的校級英文演講大賽。請你給外教Terry寫封郵件,邀請他擔任評委。內容包括:1. 時間和地點;2. 準備工作:簡要了解「中國夢」的背景;3. 表示感謝並期待回復。其次選用正確的人稱和時態,用一般現在時、第一人稱來寫。然後寫出單個句子,使用正確的連詞,連句成段。具體來說,寫這篇文章時,要注意文中給出的細節都要包括,不要遺漏。這篇文章對於考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點都需要包括,缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態,上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關係,不能出現文章脫節問題。儘量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞彙和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】]
本篇書面表達要點全面,結構緊湊,是一篇較好的範文。這篇短文使用了大量的複合句。例如:使用了賓語從句I know you always have a busy schedule, but I' d greatly appreciate it if you could be kind to come.。
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假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,你寫信建議你的美國朋友George 參加中國日報 (China Daily)專門為外國人舉辦的2018「最美中國」(Amazing China)手機攝影大賽。信的內容包括:
1. 作品內容要求;
2. 提交時間和方式;
3. 表示願意提供幫助。
注意: 1. 詞數不少於50;
2. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
【參考範文】
Dear George,
How is everything going? I have some exciting news for you! China Daily will hold a mobile photo contest named 「Amazing China」, only open to foreigners. I know you love photography, so why not give it a try?
The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, famous places or historical sites, local customs of China and so forth. And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation: time, place, name of the work, and stories behind. Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Each participant can turn in three photos at most to Liuying@chinadaily.com. Deadline for entries is Oct.15, 2018.
For more information, you can refer to China Daily' s official website.
Well, I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do. If you are interested, I' m more than happy to be your photography companion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【試題分析】
本文是一封書信。你寫信建議你的美國朋友George 參加中國日報 (China Daily)專門為外國人舉辦的2018「最美中國」(Amazing China)手機攝影大賽。信的內容包括:作品內容要求;提交時間和方式;表示願意提供幫助。寫作時要認真閱讀前面的提示,根據所給要點,並以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想像力,採用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態、語態的合理運用,同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【亮點說明】
本文是一封書信,格式正確,內容齊全,結構布局合理,文中使用高級句子。will hold a mobile photo contest named 「Amazing China」,過去分詞做後置定語;why not give it a try?句中使用why not do sth.的固定句式;And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation:句中使用含情態動詞的被動語態;I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do.此處for是並列連詞,表示「原因」; If you are interested, I' m more than happy to be your photography companion.句中if引導條件狀語從句。
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假定你是中學生李華。你的外教Peter昨天結束在中國的工作,回到了英國倫敦。你因故未能送行。請根據以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 解釋原因;
3. 期待重逢。
注意:1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
________________________________________________________________________________
【參考範文】
Dear Peter,
I am so sorry for not being able to see you off at the airport yesterday. I hope your journey back to London went well.My cousin, who lives in another city, came to set me yesterday. This was the first time that he had been here, so I had to pick him up at the train station which is so faraway from the airport. Therefore, I didn't have time to make it to the airport. I would have been there if I could. Once again, please accept my apology.
When do you plan to visit China again? I really look forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【試題分析】
首先審題,這篇文章要求假定你是中學生李華。你的外教Peter昨天結束在中國的工作,回到了英國倫敦。你因故未能送行。請根據以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件:1.表示歉意;2.解釋原因;3.期待重逢。其次選用正確的人稱和時態,表示歉意和期待重逢,用一般現在時;解釋原因,用一般過去時,用第一人稱來寫。然後寫出單個句子,使用正確的連詞,連句成段。具體來說,寫這篇文章時,要注意文中給出的細節都要包括,不要遺漏。這篇文章對於考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點都需要包括,缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態,上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關係,不能出現文章脫節問題。儘量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞彙和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】
本篇書面表達要點全面,結構緊湊,是一篇較好的範文。這篇短文使用了大量的複合句。例如:使用了賓語從句I hope your journey back to London went well.和定語從句My cousin, who lives in another city, came to set me yesterday.
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假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Mark希望向你了解國畫的有關知識,原定見面時間,因故需要推遲,請給Mark寫一封郵件,說明情況。要點包括:
1.表示歉意並說明原因;
2. 重約見面討論時間;
3. 推薦先參觀國畫展覽。
注意:1.詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【參考範文】
Dear Mark,
I hate to say sorry, but there is a change in my school arrangements. So I am afraid I won' t be able to keep my appointment to discuss traditional Chinese paintings with you. I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change. I suggest we put it off from 3 pm this weekend until the same time next Thursday. Will that be fine for you? Good news is that an exhibition of Chinese paintings is to be held this weekend. Works by some nationwide famous painters will be included in the exhibits. A visit there will definitely help better your understanding of the paintings.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【試題分析】
本文是道歉信,要注意道歉信的格式,開頭真誠地向朋友道歉,說明道歉的原因——因自己有事所以不能如期和朋友見面;然後重約見面討論時間,並推薦朋友參觀國畫展覽。最後期待朋友答覆。寫作時要注意條理清楚,要點全面,態度誠懇,主動語態和被動語態交替使用。
【本文亮點】
使用了賓語從句I won't be able to keep my appointment to discuss traditional Chinese paintings with you.和we put it off from 3 pm this weekend until the same time next Thursday.表語從句that an exhibition of Chinese paintings is to be held this weekend.
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假定你是李華,在你的美國朋友Jonah的鼓勵和建議下,你的英語最近取得很大進步。現在請你寫一封感謝信,表示對他的感謝並請他幫忙推薦幾本英文小說,最後邀請他來中國參觀。
注意:1. 詞數100左右;
2. 書信的格式已給出,不計入總詞數。
【參考範文】
Dear Jonah,
How is everything going recently? I am writing to express my thanks to you for your generous help.
Without your encouragement and valuable advice, I couldn't have made so much progress in my English learning. And now I want to read some English novels in my spare time to improve my English reading skills. Would you like to recommend some excellent English novels to me?
You have told me that you are very interested in Chinese culture. I sincerely hope that you can come to visit China and I will show you around some places of interest.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【試題分析】
本文考查半開放性寫作。要求寫一封感謝信,向朋友表示感謝。有部分文字提示,給了考生自由發揮的餘地較大,對於考生的綜合能力要求較高。考生首先要認真審題,確定時態和人稱,確定寫作要點,不要有遺漏。寫作時注意準確運用時態,上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關係,不能出現文章脫節問題。儘量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞彙和高級句型為文章潤色,選擇句式時要賦予變化,同時也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。注意要求的詞數100詞左右,不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點點評】
I am writing to express my thanks to you for your generous help.開門點題,直接明了地表明了寫信的目的。
第二段是文章的中心,運用了較多的高級詞彙和句型:
Without your encouragement and valuable advice, I couldn' t have made so much progress in my English learning.使用了虛擬語氣,高級詞彙encouragement,valuable,短語made so much progress。
Would you like to recommend some excellent English novels to me?使用了句型would you like to do…?
第三段做出誠懇地邀請。
I sincerely hope that you can come to visit China and I will show you around some places of interest.使用了賓語從句和短語places of interest。
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假定你是李華,你的美國朋友Peter對中國春聯(Spring Festival couplets)產生了濃厚興趣,來信向你了解中國的春聯文化。請你用英語寫一封回信,為他介紹春聯的用途、內容和寓意等。
注意:1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入支出數。
Dear Peter,
I' m glad to know you have a great interest in Spring Festival couplets.
【參考範文】
Dear Peter,
I' m glad to know you have a great interest in Spring Festival couplets. Now, let me introduce some details of them to you.
As a symbol of Chinese traditional culture, Spring Festival couplets are essential for Chinese people to celebrate the Spring Festival. They are always stuck on the door or the wall of a house. Written with a writing brush on red paper, Spring Festival couplets use some positive words to show wishes for love, health, success, wealth, happiness and so on. They always have a theme, representing a better life or a successful future, and some of them include best wishes and expectations. Besides, the topic of singing high praises of our motherland is another popular choice.
I do hope my introduction can be of help to you. If you have any other questions, please don' t hesitate to inform me.
Yours,
Lihua
【試題分析】
本文是一封書信。美國朋友Peter對中國春聯(Spring Festival couplets)產生了濃厚興趣,來信向你了解中國的春聯文化,你在回信時重點為他介紹春聯的用途、內容和寓意等。
這是一篇提綱式作文,寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱,因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示,認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關係,然後確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。根據所給提綱,列出要點,並以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想像力,靈活運用英語知識,採用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來,注意主次分明,詳略得當。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性。
【亮點說明】
本文是一封書信,格式正確,範文涵蓋了所有的要點,語言簡潔,但是不乏好的詞組和句式:have a great interest in「對……有極大的興趣」;As a symbol of「作為……的象徵符號」;Written with a writing brush on red paper, Spring Festival couplets use some positive words to show wishes for love, health, success, wealth, happiness and so on.句中用過去分詞做原因狀語;They always have a theme, representing a better life or a successful future,現在分詞做伴隨狀態;I do hope my introduction can be of help to you.強調謂語運用巧妙;另外句中Besides,的運用顯得文章層次分明,過渡自然。
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