Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Habit of Smoking with reference to the picture given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.
【參考範文】 The Habit of Smoking
In the picture, cigarettes were put together to form a phrase "THE END", which vividly implies the habit of smoking does a great harm to people's happy life. Smoking poses a potential danger to both the smokers themselves and the non-smokers who breathe in the secondhand smoke, which is even more harmful.
China has a large smoker population. To make things worse, the people who smoke have been on the rise on a daily basis. Some people, especially youngsters, pick up smoking because they think it's cool. Meanwhile,many others regard smoking cigarettes as a way to release pressure or an important lubricant in the social relationship. The sad thing about all this is that many people, knowing smoking is a bad habit, still hold on to it.
Currently, perhaps it is not easy to ban the tobacco industry, but it is possible to enforce the no-smoking policy in all public places, making it more and more difficult and inconvenient for smokers to smoke and at the same time. ensuring peoole who do not smoke to have fresh air to breathe.
【參考譯文】 吸菸的習慣
在圖片中,一些香菸被拼成了一個英語短語「結束」,這生動地暗示了吸菸會嚴重危害人們的幸福生活。吸菸不僅對於吸菸者本身很危險,對吸二手菸的不吸菸者也是如此,而且二手菸的危害更大。中國的菸民數量十分龐大,更糟糕的是,吸菸的人數每天都在攀升。一些人(尤其是青少年)開始吸菸是因為他們覺得吸菸很酷。與此同時,還有很多人認為吸菸是一種緩解壓力的方式,也是社會關係中重要的潤滑劑。這一切所導致的結果就是許多人即使知道吸菸是一種不好的習慣,也仍然不肯戒菸。
目前看來,取締整個菸草行業可能並非易事,但是我們可以執行在公共場合禁止吸菸的政策。這樣,既可以使菸民吸菸更加困難和不便,又可以保證不吸菸的人能夠呼吸到新鮮的空氣。
【要點用法】
cigarette香菸 lubricant潤滑劑
imply暗示 hold on to堅持,不放棄
do a great harm to…嚴重危害……enforce執行
secondhand smoke二手菸 ensure確保
【句法點評】
1.In the picture,cigarettes were put together to form a phrase「THE END」,which vividly impfies the habit of smoking does a great harm to people's happy life.
首句直入主題,介紹圖畫內容,被動句與非限制性定語從句相結合,句式靈活。
2.To make things worse,the people who smoke have been on the rise on a daily basis.
tomakethingsworse意為「使事情更糟糕的是……」。beonthe rise意為「在逐漸增加、上升」。on adaily basis意為「每天」,可用於替換常用表達everyday。這三個短語都是非常地道的表達方式,值得積累。
3.Tbe sad thing about all this is that many people,knowing smoking is a bad habit,still hold on to it.that引導表語從句,其中的knowing smoking is a bad habit是現在分詞短語作讓步狀語,也是插入語。hold onto意為「堅持,不放棄」,等同於stickto。
4.…but it is possible to enforce the no-smoking policy in all public places.making it more and more difficult…and at the same time.ensuring people who do not smoke…to enforce a policy為固定搭配,意為「推行某一政策」,making…和ensuring…為並列結構,均為現在分詞短語作結果狀語。在描述問題之後提出現實的解決方案,使文章更具深度。
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