【犯罪類】
A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy seriously destroyed school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sending to prison. Do you think young criminals should be sent to jail? 報導顯示：14歲的年輕人校園違規後會受到做清潔工作的處罰而非服刑，你認為少年犯是否應該被送進監獄?
【考題點評】
開年總是伴隨新題出現，規律不變，預測有難度。然而，題庫有限，恆熱不變。本場為全新角度，卻是舊題改寫，和小鵬哥預測犯罪類第二題極其相似。
【小鵬預測】
【犯罪類】
1. Research suggests that majority of criminals who send to prison would commit crimes when set free, what do you think of this case? What can be done to solve this problem? 研究顯示：大多數刑滿釋放人員會再次犯罪，原因何在，如何解決?
2. Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree? 有人認為：將犯罪分子送入監獄不是最好的解決犯罪問題的方法，教育和工作培訓是更好的方法，是否同意?
【相關題目】
Some people think the only purpose of prison is to punish crimes, others think it has other functions. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 有人認為刑罰的唯一的目的是嚴懲犯罪，有人認為刑罰還有其他功能，討論兩種觀點，給出你的意見? (2013年2月16日)
Some people think law-breakers should be sent to prison, however, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 有人認為違法者應該被送進監獄，有人認為有才藝的犯罪分子應該被鼓勵去工作，討論兩種觀點，給出你的意見?(2009年9月17日)
【頭腦風暴】
有誰年少不痴狂，少年犯罪某種意義上是一種「激情犯罪。」少年犯罪更多的是衝動犯罪、過失犯罪、被誘導犯罪。 青少年涉世不深，模仿力強，定力不足，因此他們才常常有犯罪的「熱血」和「衝動」。他們耍勇鬥狠，爭強好勝，風風火火闖九州，該出手時就出手，尤其是當一些少年犯來自暴力或單親家庭，亦或是受到外界的不良影響之時。人言：「一失足成千古恨。」我說：「人生長路漫漫，只要你反思人生，向上向善，人生就還有峰迴路轉的餘地。」
【作家立場】尚未成年者若僅是校園違規，鼓勵他們服務社區或者做清潔工作是可取的，然而，對於慣性犯罪者，重罪輕罰是不可取的。
【思路拓展】
1. 商業化大眾傳媒的不良影響，暴力或單親家庭的不良成長環境，或者，青少年本身的好奇心和模仿力強都是他們誤迷途的根源，因此，對於初次犯罪者或者過失犯罪者，理應給予他們改過自新的機會，鼓勵少年犯服務社區，清掃街道都不失為可行的措施。
2. 然而，對於少年犯罪，也不能固定刑罰。我們還應該考慮他們惡行的影響和動機，有些「性攻擊」，「校園欺凌」類的少年犯已經給受害者帶來巨大痛苦，造成嚴重的社會負面影響，因此，重罪輕罰亦不可取，只有適度量刑才能威懾潛在犯罪分子、體現法律公正、安慰受害者家屬。
小鵬哥攝影作品
【範文賞析】
【首段】 背景介紹 + 作家立場
Alarmingly, various misdeeds among teenagers ranging from school bullying or sex assault are now becoming big headaches in many countries. Juvenile delinquency not only afflicts the victims but also jeopardizes the community. Many efforts have already been made on how to crack down juvenile crime, but, the effect is far from satisfying. This essay aims to represent relevant measures of penalties.
【解析】
1. juvenile delinquency = teenage crime = youth crime n青少年犯罪
2. afflict = agonize = distress v 使痛苦
3. jeopardize the community = endanger the society v 危害社會
4. crack down juvenile crime v降低青少年犯罪
5. measures of penalty = measures of punishment n 懲罰措施
【二段】 對於初次犯罪者或過失犯罪者的處罰措施：
Nobody is innate perpetrator，during the journey of life，those who are in the formative years are，sometimes，derailed by manifold causes such as the negative influence of negative mass media, the disadvantaged family background or external factors. In this sense, stricter penalty for the first offenders, unintentional lawbreakers is far from rational, especially when taking the teenagers』 immature mentality into account. Virtually, appropriate punishment is commendable, to motivate those juvenile offenders to serve the community or sweeping the street can be reasonable measures.
【解析】
1. Nobody is innate perpetrator. 人性本善
2. In this sense, stricter penalty for the first offenders, unintentional lawbreakers is far from rational, especially when taking the teenagers』 immature mentality into account. 因此，對於初犯者或者過失犯罪者，重罰遠非理性，尤其當我們考慮到他們不成熟的心智的時候。
3. To motivate those juvenile offenders to serve the community or sweeping the street can be reasonable measures. 鼓勵少年犯服務社區或者清掃街道都是合理的措施。
【解析】sweep v打掃(尤其是用大柄掃把清掃街道)
【拓展】The economic crisis is sweeping across the world. 經濟危機正在席捲全球。
【三段】 為何不能固定刑罰，其他處罰措施有哪些：
Notwithstanding all that，taking the effects of a misconduct and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for ensuring justice of the law. There should not be fixed punishment for all youth crime. Some misdeeds, for example, school bullying or sex assaults will inevitably distress the sufferers and endanger the society. Hence, light penalty for felony is unwise. Conversely, stricter punishment for hardened criminals will not only embody the justice of law but also exert a deterrent effect on those potential malefactors.
【解析】
1. a prerequisite n一種必要條件
2. Taking the effects of misconduct and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for ensuring justice of the law. 考慮到犯罪的影響和動機是缺乏法律公正的先決條件。
3. School bullying or sex assaults will inevitably distress the sufferers and endanger the society. 性攻擊或校園欺凌會不可避免地傷害受害者，危及社會安定。
4. Light penalty for felony is unwise. 重罪輕罰是不明智的。
5. Stricter punishment for hardened criminals will not only embody the justice of law but also exert a deterrent effect on those potential malefactors. 對於重刑犯的嚴厲處罰不僅體現法律公正，而且，可以震懾潛在的犯罪分子。
【尾段】總結立場
To sum up，there is no simple resolution for such a complicate social problem，it is reasonable to expect that the combination of these suggestions may be needed. Custom-tailored penalty may be the best strategy for each teenage crime.
【解析】
Custom-tailored penalty may be the best strategy for each teenage crime 對於每一種少年犯罪行為的量體裁衣的處罰措施也許才是最好的策略。
【創造感言】
本篇思維鋒利如刀，文筆行雲流水。小鵬哥每篇文本以亮劍的標準要求自己,力求完美,不留餘地。 唯有厚積薄發,才能一飛沖天。江河浩瀚，始於點滴。千裡之行，始於足下，我們要習慣像螞蟻一樣，聚沙成塔。
【經典語料】
1. the custom-made penalty n量體裁衣的處罰措施
2. violate the law = perpetrate the law v違反法律
3. conduct ant-social offences v 做出反社會行為
4. arouse one’s violent impulse v誘發了人的暴力的衝動
5. enable those who are led astray to make compensation for their misconducts v使那些誤入迷途者對於他們的過失做出補償
6. reflect on their evil lives v反思他們罪惡的人生
7. As for those hardened teenage criminals, the government should be urged to impose stricter penalty on them so that other potential young law-breakers can be deterred. 對於青少年慣犯而言，政府應該加大懲罰措施，這樣可以震懾潛在的犯罪分子。
8. So immature and inexperienced are some youngsters that they tend to blindly imitate what they have seen, especially when they expose to pornographic movies and violent on-line games. 一些年輕人是如此不成熟，缺乏經驗，以至於他們會盲目地效仿他們看到的一切，尤其是當他們接觸到色情電影和暴力遊戲的時候。
9. In this sense, their cause of committing crimes can be owed to the negative influence of the mass media. 因此，他們的犯罪原因可以被歸結為商業化大眾傳媒的不良影響。
10. The young prisoners should be inspired and educated to serve the community to compensate for their misdeeds, sweeping the street can be a good in case in point. 少年犯應該被鼓勵和教育去做社區服務，以彌補他們的犯罪行為，清潔街道也許就是很好的方法。
作者介紹：
薛鵬(@雅思小鵬哥)，新東方網專欄作家，長春市作家協會會員。高中時代出版詩文集《選擇堅強》，每年創作20萬字原創語料庫以及範文。吉林大學外國語言學及應用語言學碩士。17年英語教學經驗 (7年新東方雅思託福SAT教學經歷)，前長春新東方功勳教師，多次培訓出雅思和託福高分學員(雅思寫作8.0分，託福寫作29分)。
愛生活，愛運動，愛音樂電影，愛旅行美食，愛讀書攝影，更愛英語教學。20歲登上英語講臺，主講英語萬詞速記課程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各級別詞彙教學。
大一時即在報刊雜誌上主持「英語學習系列談」以及「薛鵬教你學單詞」等專欄。2006年獲得「外研社/朗文杯」新概念背誦大賽吉林省賽區大學成人組冠軍，全國總決賽大學成人組二等獎。
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教學理念：Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注滿一桶水，而是點燃一把火)
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