受邀為劍13小作文寫範文的英國老師，在雅思考試中獲得總分9分的成績
The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
圖中圓形包圍的部分，叫做什麼？
這叫做T字路，並且和 Hospital Road 相連
the T-junction with Hospital Road
它在 ring road 中處於什麼位置？
ring road 南側中間的部分
in the centre of the southern section (of the ring road)
圖中圓形包圍的部分，叫做什麼？
Hospital Road 和 City Road 交叉的十字路口
the crossroads with City Road
圖中方框包圍的部分是 bus stop，它們是如何排布的？
一邊3個
圖中圓形包圍的部分，如何表達？
(with) access to both roundabouts mentioned above
圖中方框包圍的部分是 car park, 它的長度和 Hospital Road 的長度相同
stretched the full length of the east side of Hospital Road
圖中圓形包圍的部分，叫做什麼？
an access point
它在 ring road 中處於什麼位置？
in the south-east of the ring road
開頭段
The access routes to a hospital in 2007 and 2010 are shown in the upper and lower maps respectively.
主體段1：總體介紹主要的變化
It is clear that the ring road surrounding the hospital itself was largely unchanged between 2007 and 2010. However, the transport infrastructure was considerably upgraded, most notably with the addition of two roundabouts, and the expansion of the car parking and bus facilities.
主體段2：和 ring road 相關的變化，順帶寫了另一個 roundabout
With regard to the ring road, the only change seen in 2010, compared to 2007, was the construction of a roundabout in the centre of the southern section, in place of the original T-junction with Hospital Road. At the other end of the same road, a further roundabout was built at the location of the crossroads with City Road.
主體段3：車站
In 2007, the hospital was served by six bus stops on Hospital Road, with three on each side. By 2010, these stops had disappeared and had been replaced by a bus station to the west of Hospital Road, with access to both roundabouts mentioned above.
主體段4：停車場
In 2007, there was only one car park, which stretched the full length of the east side of Hospital Road, with a single access point in the south-east of the ring road. By 2010, this had become a car park for staff only and a further car park for public use only had been constructed, to the right of the eastern section of the ring road.
The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
我們都知道，動態柱狀圖可以看做線圖。
1) 租房家庭的比例總體下降，最後小幅上升
2) 住自購房的家庭的比例總體上升，最後小幅下降
似乎這是一個2條線的線圖，文章結構：
A. 把信息分成2個主體段，分別寫租房和住自購房的家庭對應的兩條線
B. 然後，在結尾段寫1971年以及之前和之後租房和自購房的比例大小關係
然而，這樣想就錯了。
不建議這樣寫，有2個原因
圖形隱含了信息
數據是否需要全部寫？
不用。
既然加起來是100%，其實每一年寫租房（或者住自購房的）家庭的比例即可。
那麼，
在你把租房家庭主體段寫完之後，住自購房的家庭主體段已經不需要寫了
雖然1971年之前的5年租房的比住自購房的多，但是差異一樣嗎？
顯然不一樣，而這個差異大小的區別是必寫信息
正確的分段方式
主體段1：1971年以及之前的共12個比例分成一大組（一個主體段），要比較（租房比住自購房）多得特別多和多得沒那麼多
主體段2：1971年之後的8個比例分成另一大組（另一個主體段），其他同上
結尾段：寫租房的總趨勢和住自購房的總趨勢
推薦這種分段方式，是因為它能更好地展示圖形中的 comparisons, 其實也算是這個題目的標準寫法。
但是，並不是非要用標準的方式才能寫作文。
如果不這樣分段，這篇小作文能達到7分嗎？
能，只要你語言夠好。
開頭段
The bar chart illustrates how the proportions of households that lived in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales changed from 1918 to 2011.
主體段1：1971年之前
Before 1971, more households lived in rented accommodation than in owned accommodation. The biggest gap was in 1918, when 77% households rented. The same proportions (68%) of households lived in owned accommodation in 1939 and 1953. In 1961, there were as many as 40% of households in owned accommodation. Finally, the year 1971 witnessed equal proportions of households that lived in both types of accommodation.
主體段2：1971年之後
On the other hand, there were more households that lived in owned accommodation than in rented accommodation after 1971. In 1991 and 2001, households in owned accommodation more than doubled those in rented accommodation. The difference was less prominent in 1981 and 2001, when about 60% of households lived in owned accommodation.
結尾段：租房和住自購房家庭的趨勢
It is clear that, while there was an increase in the percentage of households in owned accommodation in these two nations, fewer and fewer households rented.
The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
我們得定義這個「寫」的意思。
1) 不用具體把每一個數字都列舉出來，但是
2) 只選擇一些國家來寫，或者
3) 一些國家只寫產電量不寫用電量（或者反過來），都是不行的。
所謂不用把每個數據列舉出來，是說一些數據可以打包處理——比如給一個區間（考鴨要自己找到上限和下限）。但是，只有接近的數據才能放到一個區間內。
常見的分段方法是，將數據接近的寫到一段。但是，這樣就會導致一個主體段特別短（4個數據），另一個主體段特別長（16個數據）。所以，這個題目例外，建議前五和後五個國家各分一段。這樣，對應的2個主體段字數就會差不多。
comparisons 是考鴨作文特別容易遺漏的信息，接下來會進行逐一列舉
1) 產電量和用電量最大（特別大）的國家
2) 每個國家產電量和用電量的差異，都不大
3) 產電量和用電量的差異，只有 Germany 產電少於用電
4) Russia 產電量和用電量最接近（考慮寫，因為題目信息太多，建議次要信息都不寫）
開頭段
The bar chart presents data relating to the quantities of electricity (measured in billions of kilowatts per hour) produced and used in 2014 by the ten countries in the world that produce and use the greatest amount of electricity.
主體段1：總體的對比
It is clear that China and the USA are the biggest producers and users of electricity by far. Except for Germany, all the countries in question produce more electricity than they use, though the differences are generally not large.
主體段2：前五個國家的數據
China and the USA produced around 5,400 billion kWh and around 4,100 billion kWh of electricity respectively. Further, both nations used only fractionally less than this sum. Russia, Japan and India occupied positions three, four and five in the top ten, with corresponding consumption figures ranging between 1,057 billion and 871 billion with respect to generation and ranging from 1,038 billion to just under 700 billion for usage.
主體段3：後五個國家的數據
The final five places in the top ten were occupied (in descending order) by Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and the Republic of Korea. The spread of both production and usage figures was approximately 620 billion to around 450 billion. Canada, France and Brazil were notable in that their production quantities were all at least 75 billion higher than their usage figures. In contrast, Germany consumed about 60 billion more than it produced.
重點詞彙
1) fractional
Very small; insignificant
fractionally=slightly
2) spread
The extent or limit to which something is or can be spread
The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
把圖中變化較大和變化沒那麼大的部分區分開。
這實際上也是 sports center 的核心部分，其中只有 gym 變成了大約2倍，其他部分沒有變化。
這塊區域，叫做 the sports centre building
或者 the main building
此外，這個區域的 changing room 和 seatings，共同叫做 swimming facilities
如果覺得文章字數過多，可以只寫 swimming facilities
gym 沿著 sports center 的北邊
stretch along the north side
gym 擴張的方向是向東
按照編號的順序
1. 西側的 outdoor courts 變成了 lersure pool
2. 東側的 outdoor courts 變成了 sports hall 和 dance studios
3. 前門的區域（包含 reception），新增了 sports shop 和 cafe
這塊區域3，叫做reception area
reception area變大了
sports shop 和 cafe 分別在這塊區域的西邊和東邊
4. 西南角和東南角個新增一個changing room
sports center 實際佔地面積，幾乎翻倍了
以下範文，不是按照傳統的「一幅圖分一組」的方式寫的，而是按照「變化大和變化小的區域各分一組」寫的。
開頭段
The upper map shows the plan of a university sports centre as it is now and the lower map shows the same building once it has been redeveloped.
主體段1：變化的總體介紹
Overall, the existing 25-metre pool and surrounding facilities will remain largely unchanged. However, the building will be substantially expanded by means of the addition of a leisure pool and a range of other new facilities.
主體段2：中間區域
Currently, the sports centre building consists only of a 25m pool, related swimming facilities and a gym that stretches along the north side. While the planned new sports centre will occupy around twice the current floorspace, these facilities will remain unchanged except that the gym will be significantly extended to the east.
主體段3：周圍區域
Either side of the building at present, there are outdoor courts which will make way for a new leisure pool to the west of the main building, and a sports hall and two dance studios to the east. To the south of the 25m pool, the current reception area will be enlarged to accommodate a sports shop and café, on the west and east sides respectively. Finally, new changing rooms will be built in the south-west and south-east corners.
詞彙解釋
floor space
floor space, or floorspace is the area (measured as square feet or square metres) taken up by a building or part of it 佔地面積