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大作文題目：

Extreme sports, such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【話題分類】：社會生活類

【題目解析】：

這是一道從題型上比較簡單的「觀點類（agree/disagree）」題目，大意是：像跳傘和滑雪這樣的極限運動很危險，所以應該禁止。你是否同意該觀點？該題型在表達觀點上通常可以比較多樣化；筆者選擇的是「完全不同意」的「一邊倒」寫法，相對更加直接，觀點力度更強。支持「完全不同意禁止極限運動」的理由是：
1）人們會失去體驗與普通運動項目不一樣樂趣的機會；2）人們會失去另一種減壓方式，尤其是當其它方式不奏效時。

【寫作思路】：

開頭段：改寫題目 + 明確表明自己的觀點（完全不同意）。主體段 1：不同意原因1——人們會失去體驗與普通運動項目不一樣的樂趣的機會。主體段 2：不同意原因2——人們會失去另一種減壓方式，尤其是當其它方式不奏效時。

【參考範文】

There are those who opine that sporting activities that are exciting and dangerous ought to be prohibited because they are risky. Personally, I totally disagree with this statement as this practice will hinder people from enjoying the fun which cannot be brought by other traditional events as well as benefiting from an effective stress reliver.The primary justification for why I completely oppose the idea of calling a halt to adventure sports is the likelihood of the general public being deprived of opportunities to experience distinctive fun. Compared with common sports that people do for pleasure, extreme ones always embrace heights and speeds and provide an intense workout, which are characteristics that traditional activities fail to possess. Thus, when taking part in extreme sports, people are required to exert themselves fully, thereby feeling a greater amount of excitement. Another point supporting my stance is that people will lose an effective method to reduce their pressure, especially when other approaches do not work. A large number of people today are stressful and playing basketball or going biking are normally treated as sports helping them unwind. In fact, those are not helpful to victims suffering from pressure going beyond the level of their feasibility while extreme sports can perform better as being in a dangerous situation triggers a release of dopamine in people’s brain, keeping depression at bay in a possible manner. In conclusion, I strongly disapprove of the viewpoint that it is of great necessity to ban extreme sports merely due to their potential danger. This is because people will miss out on a great recreational activity and a very good approach to stress management without these sports. However, safety is crucial, so I recommend that participants should be fully trained before participating in these activities and sufficient precautionary measures should be made available.

(303 words)

【亮點詞彙及短語】

1.opine (v.) 認為

2.sporting activities 運動

3.prohibit (v.) 禁止

4.risky (adj.) 危險的

5.hinder … from … 阻止

6.event (v.) （運動）項目

7.benefit from 受益於

8.stress reliver 減輕壓力的方法

9.primary (adj.) 主要的

10.justification (n.) 理由

11.oppose (v.) 反對

12.call a halt to 叫停

13.adventure sports 極限運動

14.likelihood (n.) 可能性

15.the general public 大眾/人們

16.be deprived of 失去

17.experience (v.) 體驗

18.distinctive (adj.) 與眾不同的

19.pleasure (n.) 樂趣

20.embrace (v.) 包含

21.an intense workout 激烈的運動

22.characteristic (n.) 特徵

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