1. "Chinese people use trees as chopsticks." (拿樹當筷子?這筷子也太大了吧......應該是use trees for making chopsticks吧?由此可見雅思口語中準確使用動詞的重要性。)
2. "I think environmantal protection is essential but not so important." (典型的邏輯混亂......essential就等於very important，環保是至關重要但是不是那麼重要的?......無語......)
3. "Without electricity, the world would become so dark that a person could not even see a hand in front of his face." (缺了至關重要的時間狀語at night!這麼說的話古代人都是一直生活在伸手不見五指的黑暗中的嗎?)
4. "Watching TV is convenient and people can avoid traffic jam" (這又是什麼邏輯?看電視和避免交通擁擠有什麼關係?)
5. "I like writing because it is good for your health."
(Why?......)
6. "My grandmother is 98 years old so she is very pure." (為什麼98歲就必然「純潔」?)
7. "As we all know, every advantage has its disadvantage." (......好深奧......)
8. "The rate of net-cheating has boomed by 1.27% in the past 2 years." (說這句話的人一定是雅思圖表作文沒學好。Boom=Increase rapidly，增長1.27%算rapid嗎?應該用climb或edge up。)
9. "Modern ways of life brings people some healthy diseases." (疾病還有「健康的疾病」?貌似說這句話的人想表達的是"健康方面的疾病吧"?那就直接用desease就可以了，因為所有的疾病都是「健康方面」的，要麼還有哪方面的?)
10. "My father is a photograph......" (我爸爸是一張照片?這個強勁的......應該是photographer。)
11. "The data is very astonished!" (「數據非常吃驚」?典型的沒有學好現在分詞和過去分詞的區別，應該用astonishing「讓人驚訝的」。)
12. "At that time, I was studied at university." (「我那時候在大學裡被研究?」你是小白鼠嗎?應該是I was studying at university。)
13. "Traveling can enlarge our eyesight." (旅行能夠拓寬我們的視力?應該是broaden our horizon吧。)
14. "Today, more and more people are getting old." (不是more and more people在變老，是everybody!只要你是地球人都在getting old的......)
15. -"Are you a student or are you working now?"
-"Oh, in my opinion, I am a student." (為什麼要加in my opinion?難道別人都不承認你是學生?)
16. "You need some skills, such as a partner, to play table tennis." (Partner是一種skill嗎?)
17. "China is a big country, so we have four seasons." (無數小國家就沒有一年四季了嗎?)
18. "My boyfriend doesn't fit me." (Fit是指「大小尺寸適合」......應該用suit，不然會讓人想到很A的方面......)
19. "To be my friend, you must be like animal!" (「要當我的朋友，你就得像動物一樣」?多了個不必要的be意思差別好大哦!)
20. "Most Chinese people live in the north,south,east,and west of China." (除此之外還有哪裡呢?)
21. "I go shopping for sports equipment. For example, I bought a cat yesterday." (......這句話讓我快笑抽了。估計他想說bat-"球拍"吧?)
22. "She is a good person, because I know her father." (什麼邏輯?)
23. "As we all know, every corn has its two size!" (每個玉米都有兩種尺寸?)
24. "I study in a computer." (誰會在電腦裡頭學習?應該是I study with a computer.)
25. "I want to go to America to learn hotel management so I can take this IELTS test." (關係詞亂用的典範。)
26. "I live in a small city, so it has poor education."(劍橋和牛津都是所謂的small city哦!)
27. "I come from a small village-Xi'an." (您老也太謙虛了吧?)
28. "As we all know, people can't live without life." (......最讓我噴飯的一句......真的無語了......)
29. "Dancing is an indispensable part of people's lives."
(Indispensable表示「不可或缺的」，根據這句話的意思，誰要是不會跳舞的話......應該會死吧......)
30. "Young people don't like old buildings because old people go there." (同學,就這麼恨old people嗎?)
（無憂雅思）