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My father grew up in a very poor village, and his family was almost robbed during the Great Cultural Revolution, the most insane period in China. He walked to take college entrance examination alone, wearing a patchy pant. People laughed at him about his unrealistic. Several weeks later, my father became the first university student in his village.
What my father experienced has a great influence on me. He makes me believe the power of self-belief. Unlike many girls, I am determined to pursue what I like and make it come true. For example, I was the first one in my stringent high school to arrange boys and girls to dance together, the first one to beat boys in the tennis court, and the first one to travel to many places in China, Japan, Thailand, Europe and the United States. Most importantly, because I live in Nanjing, where Nanking Massacre happened in 1937, I did a lot of research about the history of China and Japan. I organized students at my university to visit martyrs cemetery from time to time, to inform the new generation to cherish for what we have today and make our contribution to make this world a better and more peaceful place.
Besides, my father always tells me that we should treat everyone equally and help others as much as we can. At my university, there was one girl who acted strangely and had no friends. Everyone said she was creepy. However, I knew, and I could clearly see that she need a friend and love. So no matter how other people judged her and even me, I became the first one to talk to her and have lunch with her. I wanted to prove that everyone has some ice points that were kept to themselves, but love and trust can warm them. I tried my best to let others know that this girl was one of us, and we should not treat her like a stranger. Gradually, this girl had more friends. Nowadays, her smile and laughter is everywhere now. When I talked to her now, I can see the confidence and even gratitude through her eyes. It can not better to change another’s life by what I have done, and I will continue to maximize my influence, to make more people smile.
My father and I always devotes to reaching out to many poor families in rural areas of China, where people can not afford their children to colleges. Starting from high school, I have been calling for the friends around me to write letters to students in rural and western part of China. I hope it can instill the students in those areas with hope and encouragement. Once upon a time, a girl named Sajier from Tibet mailed me a scarf made by herself. I was amazed at the pattern, through which I could feel the beauty, purification and divine of the people in the far away place. I felt that there was a fire burning inside me and a sound lingering in my ear. I strongly felt that I had the responsibility to bring such a beautiful pattern to the world and let more people know about this amazing beauty. This idea, with my past experience in my father’s fabric manufacturing company and engineering projects, supports me to pursue higher education in the United States. I hope by further study, I can have a more accurate and practical plan about approaches technology and fashion, and create a more innovative business model to establish the digital platform.
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