「流程圖要素」勤讀題不要慌,起始於Overview,描述清晰,使用連詞,句式儘量多變,祝烤鴨童鞋們輕鬆掌握流程圖。
The Flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled (第一句一定要交待出整個圖內容,讓考官一眼就明白你讀懂題了,The flow chart shows how… 可以作為一個萬能的流程圖開頭套句).
It is clear that (和寫別的A類小作文一樣,流程圖也需要overview,It is clear that…是一個很不錯的句式童鞋們可以大膽使用) there are six distinct stages in this process(圖標一共有幾個流程也一定需要再第一段內表明), from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper(然後烤鴨們把第一個以及最後一個流程寫進去就好啦,這樣,一個完美的流程圖題introduction就寫完啦).
At the first stage(body段需要從第一個stage寫到最後一個stage哦,但是切記,千萬不要簡單的重複,要不然就成流水帳了)in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then(悄悄的進入下一個階段了)sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed. Next, (又進入一個新階段了哦)the graded paper is transported to a paper mill.
Stages four and five (很巧妙的將兩個階段統一描述,高效,簡潔) of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out. Following this (很不錯的一個連接詞), all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage. Finally,(進入最後一個階段)the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine, which makes the end product: usable paper.
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見到流程圖不要慌,讀懂題很重要;
Introduction部分一定要有overview,並且將整個循環描述清楚
流程圖的每一個階段都要描述清晰,連接詞很關鍵,句式一定要多變
是不是感覺躍躍欲試?
這是鴨圈編輯的《搞定流程圖》的部分截圖,它將顧家北和慎小嶷書中關於流程圖的部分截取,然後配合網上搜集的二十多篇流程圖例文,編輯而成,如果你對流程圖不是很清楚,我覺得這一個PDF你認真看過並練習過,你不會再害怕流程圖!!(除非你沒看沒練)
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