在英語寫作課上,很多學生拿到標題後總是「提筆就寫」,沒有規劃,這樣做的後果是,作文篇章結構不清晰、內容選擇可能會脫離主題,寫出來的作文實在給不了高分。
如何解決這一難題?
同學們不妨用思維導圖來寫作文,劉凱老師幫助大家提筆前胸有成竹,大步提升寫作能力!
本文將詳細介紹用思維導圖寫作的步驟,我還附有兩篇示例和4篇範文哦~
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寫作時需考慮的因素
(1)本話題所需要的詞塊、語塊
(2)本話題的寫作模板結構等
(3)本話題所涉及到的經典名句、諺語等
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困惑與對策
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困惑1
寫什麼?
以《How to learn well?》為題,寫一篇作文,那麼我們應該如何入手開始寫作呢?我們可以做出以下兩張思維導圖,整理好一篇作文的寫作框架。
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困惑2
如何選材
即使知道了寫作框架,但在補充框架時又會遇到另一個困惑,那就是如何選材。
對策:
1.選定英語導圖各區域所需的詞塊和語塊。
2.將各區域的詞塊和語塊按段落寫成連貫的語篇。
3.對照思維導圖自我批改,注意人稱、時態語態、句型結構的正確使用。
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困惑3
如何表達?
寫作句式單一,同樣的意思不會用不同的句式去表達,因此文章大多雷同,缺乏個性。
對策:
1.儘量用不同句式來表達相同意思,並儘量選擇更好的句式。
2.短文寫作,表達力求精悍、生動、豐富,避免重複用一樣的句式。
3.特別注意使用承上啟下的詞語和句子。
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思維導圖思考流程
1. 審題、理清思路:考慮寫什麼(挑選關鍵詞,搭建作文框架)。2. 選擇詞語:根據話題和作文框架選用所需要的語料(詞塊和語塊)。
3. 遣詞造句:根據思維導圖中的語料,用合適的句型寫作。
4. 語篇定稿:根據思維導圖修改潤色作文——緊扣主題、表達準確,關聯自然,語篇流暢。
實例1
假如你有兩位同學——芳芳和明明,參加了上星期二學校組織的英語演講比賽,他們的不同表現使你深有感觸。請你根據下列表各中的內容提示寫一篇英語短文。
參考詞彙:英語演講比賽 English Speech Contest
要求:1. 詞數:80~100個。
2. 短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。3. 要點齊全,行文連貫,可適當發揮。
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did makes me think deeply. Before the contest, Fangfang thought __________.
思維導圖寫作過程
範文1
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did makes me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought she was good at English, so she didn't need to spend more time on the contest at all. She spent a lot of time in choosing clothes. But Mingming was different. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Though he hurt his leg two days before the contest, he didn't give up.
In the end, Fangfang didn't get ready well enough. At the contest, she was so nervous that she she failed. But Mingming won because he tried his best.
In my opinion, we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and make progress every day.
範文2
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did makes me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought that she was good at English. So it wasn't necessary to spend lots of time preparing for the contest. What she only thought was what clothes to wear. At last, she was too nervous to finish the contest because she didn't prepare well.
Instead, Mingming had been studying and practicing English. He also asked others for help. What's more, he hurt his leg two days before the contest. But he didn't give up. He won the contest.
I think we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and never give up.
實例2
生活是豐富多彩的,沒有愛好的人生是不完整的人生。親愛的同學,在生活中,你有什麼興趣愛好嗎?這個興趣愛好是怎樣培養起來的?它給你的生活增添了哪些色彩?請你以 「My Hobby」為題,結合自己的親身經歷寫一篇短文。
(詞數80個左右)
要求:1.語句通順,合乎邏輯,書寫規範。
2.文中不得出現真實的姓名和學校名稱。
思維導圖寫作過程
範文1
Reading is my hobby. When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I was moved deeply by the girl. From then on I became interested in reading books.
Reading can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can also solve many problems.
In a word, reading books can make my life colorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.
範文2
My favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema, I was attracted by the beautiful sights. It was so creative that I enjoyed a lot. From then on, I became a movie fan.
Now, when I feel tired, I would go to the cinema. When I feel happy, I would go to the cinema, too. On the one hand, movies can make me feel relaxed. On the other hand, I can also learn a lot of knowledge from movies.