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【教育類】
Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smart phone, video games for fun and entertainment, some people believe that playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 現在，孩子們過度依賴科技產品， 例如計算機、智慧型手機、電子遊戲。 有人認為玩玩具或和朋友們戶外遊戲對於孩子們發展更加有益，是否認同?(2016年2月28日)
【考情點評】
2016年1月23日剛剛考察學生是否應該玩遊戲，2月28日再次考察相同主題，只是換成孩子們是應該玩遊戲還是戶外運動。可見考試周報解析對於寫作備考的重要性。託福寫作即體現冷題回補，又體現熱題恆熱的特徵。建議童鞋勤於練筆，寫作自然水到渠成。
【相關考題】
Some people believe that video games could inspire young students』 interest and make their study more efficient rather than distracting them and a waste of time, so young students should be allowed to play video games. Do you agree or disagree? 有人認為遊戲可以激發學生的學習興趣，提高他們學習效率，而不是分散他們的精力和浪費他們的時間，是否認同? (2016年1月23日)
【作家立場】 孩子們應該被鼓勵以簡單玩具或戶外運動的方式來放鬆娛樂。
【頭腦風暴】
① 笑笑三歲了，三歲的笑笑已經可以熟練使用I-phone 手機，喜歡看「關頭強」和「喜洋洋」，喜歡打I-pad 的街機三國，他甚至知道遊戲人物張飛，李典，夏侯惇等。
② 回想我的童年時代，小鵬哥的娛樂方式無比簡單：丟沙包、跳房子、做迷藏、騎馬打仗……，這些戶外運動，經濟而健康，我和小夥伴們呼吸著新鮮空氣，親近大自然。相比個體性的娛樂方式，群體性的經驗成長讓我們感受快樂的同時，也結實了一生的好友。
【思路拓展】
【網路遊戲或手機娛樂的利弊】
① 電子遊戲以其製作精美、音效絕佳、圖文並茂、情節誘人等特徵得以流行。 適度地玩遊戲也是一种放松身心的方式，同時，競技類遊戲對於孩子們的智力開發有一定的利好。
② 競技類的電子遊戲易使玩家上癮，尤其是對於缺乏自律性的孩子而言，過於沉迷電子遊戲容易使孩子們孤獨、自閉、社交方面力不從心。
【戶外運動或簡單遊戲的利好】
① 戶外運動有益健康，孩子們可以親近自然，健體強身。
② 群體成長有益孩子，群體性遊戲鍛鍊孩子們的社交能力、培養孩子們的合作意識，同時，使玩家收穫珍貴的友誼。
③ 陪孩子們做一些簡單的親子遊戲是很好的增強家庭紐帶的方式。
【範文賞析】
【首段】 背景介紹 + 作家立場
Children tend to revel in high-tech products such as smart phone or on-line games, sometimes without being aware of doing so. Sure enough，they can have a merry mood when they amuse themselves by playing computer games or mobile phones. My stand，however，is that going outside for amusement or playing simpler toys is more preferable and feasible in terms of providing those who are in the formative years with beneficial enjoyment.
【二段】 網路遊戲或手機娛樂的利弊
Indeed, games provided by high-tech products enjoy tremendous popularity amongst children and their peculiar fascination can be owed to their unique merits. More precisely, video games are characteristic of vivid pictures, appealing music or unexpected challenge, which presents players with a good source of relaxation. Meanwhile, the process of surmounting difficulties in the virtual world can still enable children to have a creative mind and thus improve their decision-making or crisis-solving abilities. However, as children lack self-discipline, the chances that they will ever be able to take up physical exercises or befriend with peers are remote，especially considering that the amount of time young kids spend watching television or playing games is astonishing. Even worse，children often ignore the outside world as a result of the addition.
【三段】 戶外運動或簡單遊戲的利好
Embarking on outdoor activities or opting for simpler toys，as a commendable hobby， is quite different and has many visible merits. For a start, playing outdoor games with friends is physically beneficial because children can breathe the fresh air, stretch their bodies and enjoy the closeness to nature. This debate reminds me of my childhood, I was keen on catching dragonflies, butterflies, fish, and crickets in summer or playing snow fight with my close friends in winter. What we reaped were joyous childhood and healthy physique. Also,growing experience, via associating and communicating with peers, makes a child sociable and optimistic, with no time for boredom. Instead of isolating oneself, having fun outside with friends makes a child lean to cooperate with mates and unite congenial peers, in this way, one's circle of friends grows. Eventually, accompanying children to play simpler games such as block building, flying paper plane, poker card game is an effective way to strengthen the parent-child relationship.
【尾段】再次亮明觀點
My stand is that although high-tech products can provide relaxation for leisure hours, electronic games will inevitably bright about sedentary lifestyle, poor eyesight and even obesity. Thereby, children should be encouraged to play simpler toys or do physical exercises with friends. Imaginably, the family tie can be strengthened and a child’s group experience can be fostered.
【經典語料】
1. Going outside for amusement or playing simpler toys is more preferable and feasible in terms of providing children who are in the formative years with beneficial enjoyment. 對於成長中的孩子而言，戶外運動或者簡單遊戲是更加可取可行的娛樂方式。
2. enjoy tremendous popularity amongst children 在孩子中極受歡迎
3. Their peculiar fascination can be owed to their unique merits. 他們因其獨特的優點展示了獨有的魅力。
4. video games are characteristic of vivid pictures, appealing music or unexpected challenge 電子遊戲通常以具有精美的畫面，動人的音樂和出人意料的挑戰為特徵。
5. However, as children lack self-discipline, the chances that they will ever be able to take up physical exercises or befriend with peers are remote，especially considering that the amount of time young kids spend watching television or playing games is astonishing. 然而，因為孩子們缺乏自律，他們能從事體育鍛鍊或者結實同齡好友的機會不多，尤其是考慮到他們花費在電視遊戲方面的驚人的時間。
6. Playing outdoor games with friends is physically beneficial because children can breathe the fresh air, stretch their bodies and enjoy the closeness to nature. 和朋友們從事戶外運動有益健康，因為孩子們可呼吸新鮮空氣、鍛鍊身體、親近自然。
7. in this way, one's circle of friends grows 以這樣的方式，人可以結實更多朋友。
8. What we reaped were joyous childhood and healthy physique. 我們收穫了童年的樂趣和健康的體質。
9. Although high-tech products can provide relaxation for leisure hours, electronic games will inevitably bright about sedentary lifestyle, poor eyesight and even obesity. 儘管高科技產品是休閒娛樂的方式，電子遊戲無疑會帶來久坐的生活方式、視力下降、甚至肥胖。
10. Thereby, children should be encouraged to play simpler toys or do physical exercises with friends. 因此，我們應該鼓勵孩子們簡單遊戲或者體育鍛鍊。
【創作感言】
①小曲好唱，唱好也難。越是看似簡單的題目，越難寫到個性精彩。在思想不變的情況下，語言的包裝可以令你的表達方式錦上添花，與眾不同。
②本篇惜墨如金、字斟句酌、主題明確、邏輯清晰、表達個性、句法多變，可為童鞋研習之佳作。
【作者介紹】
新東方網專欄作家：薛鵬(@雅思小鵬哥)，長春市作家協會會員，高中時代出版詩文集《選擇堅強》, 每年創作20萬字託福雅思原創語料庫以及範文。吉林大學外國語言學及應用語言學碩士。17年英語教學經驗 (7年新東方雅思託福SAT教學經歷)，前長春新東方功勳教師，多次培訓出雅思和託福高分學員(雅思寫作8分，託福寫作29分)。
愛生活，愛運動，愛音樂電影，愛旅行美食，愛讀書攝影，更愛英語教學。20歲登上英語講臺，主講英語萬詞速記課程。熟悉GRE、IELTS、TOEFL、SAT、CET等各級別詞彙教學。
大一時即在報刊雜誌上主持「英語學習系列談」以及「薛鵬教你學單詞」等專欄。2006年獲得「外研社/朗文杯」新概念背誦大賽吉林省賽區大學成人組冠軍，全國總決賽大學成人組二等獎。
對於各類寫作課程有精深研究，授課方式行雲流水，妙語連珠，知識底蘊深厚，對學員極具有啟迪性和激勵性。
教學理念：Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注滿一桶水，而是點燃一把火)
(編輯：Joe)
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