中考衝刺中考英語考點書面表達之應用文.應用文是人們日常生活中廣泛使用的文體。它最突出的特點是它 的實際應用性，應用文包括很廣，如書信、通知、日記、海報、便條、啟事、請柬、電報、合同等。應用文的語言應使用規範語言，重在實用，力求樸實、準確、簡潔。
（2017﹒北京）假如你是李華，正在美國參加一個交換生項目。今天下午你應邀和朋友Jim 一家外出，請用英語給接待家庭的媽媽Mrs. Smith 寫一個留言條，告訴她你們要去哪裡，去做什麼，以及你回家的時間和方式。
提示詞語：park, movie theater, go boating, watch a movie
提示問題：Where are you going?
What are you going to do?
When and how will you get home?
Dear Mrs. Smith,
My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon.______________________________________[來源:學科網]
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Yours,
Li Hua
（一）
（甘肅省武威市第十七中學2018屆九年級期末）假如你是劉梅，升入九年級後，你的學習和生活都發生了很大變化。請你根據下面表格中的提示，給你的筆友瑪麗亞(Maria)寫一封電子郵件，介紹一下你最近在學習和生活上的變化。
要求：1. 包括以上要點，可適當發揮；
2．80詞左右。
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（二）
（武漢市青山區2017-2018學年度九年級期中）假如你是學生會主席李雷，學校想在元月調考之前組織一次秋遊活動，請你組織策劃，並用英文寫一份書面通知傳達同學們你的計劃安排。
內容要點如下：
1. 活動目的：緩解壓力，放鬆心情，增進同學感情；了解城市文化；
2. 時間安排：下周日上午7：30在校門口集合，乘大巴遊玩，下午6：00返回；
3. 路線安排：學校——東湖——黃鶴樓——木蘭天池——學校；
4. 請在下周二下午5點之前報名；
5. 補充一兩點個人的想法。
要求：
1. 詞數：60—80；
2. 內容要連貫得體。
參考詞彙：sign one’s name 報名 Yellow Crane Tower 黃鶴樓 Mulan Great Lake 木蘭天池
Notice
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（三）
（湖北省長陽縣龍舟坪中學2018屆九年級期中）當前，全市各學校正開展＂讀書伴我成長＂活動，請你根據活動主題並結合表中的信息，以＂Growing up with good books＂為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的倡議書，向全校同學發出倡議。
要求：倡議書要包括所有的要點；倡議書的開頭已給出，不計入總字數。
My dear friends,
Reading is very important. __________________
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跟蹤訓練
（一）
Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Daniel. I’m from Sunshine Middle School. I am fifteen years old. Now I am a Grade 9 student. I love sports very much because it can bring strength to my body and mind. I am very confident and I am not afraid of making speeches in front of many people.
However, I have some problems now. I have too much homework every day. I often stay up late to finish it. I don’t get enough sleep and I feel tired in class. I find it hard to achieve a balance between my homework and my hobby.
What should I do? Can you offer me some valuable suggestions? I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes.
Daniel
【名師點睛】
1. 細心審題，明確要求 。
搞清題目的要求，以便根據不同的題材、體裁，寫出不同格式，風格各異的文章，此外，還要注意人稱、時態、地點等信息，避免出錯。
2. 抓住重點，理順要點。
草擬提綱，分清各要點之間的內在聯繫，尋求邏輯次序，分出層次，確定如何下手，使表達內容條理清楚。
4. 連句成篇，修改潤色。
檢查主題是否明確，表達方式是否恰當，接下來檢查所寫內容是否切題，該交待的內容是否交待了，最後檢查所用時態、人稱是否符合要求。檢查段落是否完整，句子表達是否準確，語法、拼寫、標點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤。學科#網
（二）
【思路導航】
這是一篇材料作文。根據提示內容可知用一般現在時，把所提示的內容逐條翻譯成英文，同時還應注意寫作中要有適當性的發揮。
【參考範文】
It’s time for the Campus Singer Competition. And I’m your host, Sara.
Today we have eight contestants. They are from every grade in our school.
The rules of the Campus Singer Competition are simple. Every contestant will sing a song on the stage. And then our audience will decide on the singer they like best. The one who gets the most support will be the winner of the competition.
Are you ready for the competition? The first contestant coming on the stage is ...
You’re today’s lucky winner. You』ve won today’s prize — a computer!
Thanks, everyone. That’s today’s show. See you next time.
【亮點說明】
這篇作文層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如It’s time for sth，sing a song on the stage，decide on，be ready for，See you next time等。而The rules of the Campus Singer Competition are simple./ The one who gets the most support will be the winner of the competition./ You』ve won today’s prize — a computer!等多種句式的運用更是為文章增色不少。
（三）
【參考範文】
Boys and girls,
As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.
From the book, I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books!
That’s all. Thank you!
【亮點說明】
文章首句引用名人名言As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. 引出話題A good book can affect our life in one way or another。這可謂事半功倍，為文章開了個好頭。向聽眾介紹自己讀過的一本好書時，用一個簡單句My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart.直接明了，使聽眾一下就能接受到這些信息。 複合句It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.介紹了書籍內容，為後文自己的感受埋下伏筆。文章的結尾非常具有鼓動性，盡顯文章風採。
真題再現
（一）
Exercising is important!
Recently, we have done a survey about students』 exereising. Aocording to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good at exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it.
As we all know, exercising is god for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy.
In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising. Besides, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. (104 words)
【名師點評】
這是一篇圖表，關於初中生鍛鍊情況的調查活動。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然後用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據材料可知本文主要是應用一般現在時態，注意標點符合及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關係，語意連貫。
（二）
【參考範文】
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.
Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on. It’s a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. Come and join us! I think we』ll have a great time.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮點說明】
這篇短文內容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡清晰，自然流暢，首先通過分享好消息來引出展演及展演時間，進而介紹展演地點及展演內容最後提出邀請。同時文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意積累，掌握一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。
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【參考範文】
Hello, boys and girls! May I have your attention, please? Today we choose to rise to this beautiful place — Happy Park to celebrate our English Day! Before entering the park, there are some specific details we must know first.
To begin with, we need to be clear about the location of the facilities. After entering the park, we can see a big grassland in front of you. On the left side is a food store where you can buy some food. And on the right side stand a toilet. A beautiful swimming pool lies behind the grassland, where the water is clean enough for you to swim. What’s more, you should keep the following rules in mind. First, you must park your bikes on each side of the gate. Second, you can neither pick flowers in the park, nor play football on the grassland.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening and have a good day.
【亮點說明】
短文運用了一些短語和句式，如：choose to do sth選擇做某事；need to do sth需要做某事；on the right side在右邊；be enough for sb to do sth對某人來說是足夠的。用了定語從句，如：there are some specific details we must know first.。用了倒裝句，如：And on the right side stand a toilet.，增加了文章的亮點。
（四）
【思路導航】
本文是一篇招聘廣告。寫作時注意格式，題目要求。為老年之家招聘志願者，注意提示1．要求有愛心，善溝通……2．請有意者給你打電話686-7729。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然後圍繞要點適當發揮。注意敘述的條理性，適當使用固定句型或短語。像Are you good with…？； We need…；call…at …。
【參考範文】
Volunteers Wanted
We need volunteers in the old people’s home. Do you want to help the old people? Are you good with the old? Can you sing? Can you dance? Can you play chess with the old? Do you know many stories? If you want to join us, please call Wang Qiang at 686﹣7729. Thanks.
【亮點說明】
這篇短文格式正確，敘述有條理，語言流暢，表達準確，邏輯清晰。特別一些招聘句型的使用，像We need volunteers in the old people’s home．Do you want to…；Are you good with; Can you; If you want to to join us 等，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，減少錯誤，給文章增彩。學科#網
（五）
【參考範文】
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the DIY Club. For me, I like to do something by myself. Here are some reasons why I want to join your club.
First, making things by myself can cultivate my independent consciousness because I need to make things on my own. It’s important for teenagers to think independently and choose freely, and try things bravely.
Second, joining the club can adjust my study life. DIY has so much fun and it can enrich my life. What’s more, after I finish an object, I can experience success.
Third, DIY can improve personal qualities. It makes us face difficulties directly and be patient with questions.
I hope I can be a member of the DIY Club.
Yours Sincerely,
Justin
（六）
【參考範文】
Dear Mrs. Smith,
My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon. I am writing to tell you that we will meet in the park. Then we will go to the movie theater to watch a movie. Finally, we are going to go boating in the lake. Don’t worry about me. We will be back at 6:00 p.m. Jim’s father will send me home by taxi. I am sure to have a lot of fun. Waiting for my back.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮點說明】
這篇短文語句通順，表達準確。學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語,特別適用了表示先後順序的詞Then，Finally，使表達具有條裡性，句式Don’t worry about me. .I am sure to等的使用，更增加了文章的色彩，此文表達具有邏輯性,，有條理。
模擬檢測
（一）
【思路導航】
1. 本題為材料作文。要求學生把所給的材料儘量都用上。
2. 時態用一般現在時和過去式來寫。
3. 人稱用第一人稱來寫。
4. 用上所學的句型used to do sth. ＂過去常常做某事＂。
5. 在用上所給材料的基礎上，可適當發揮。
6. 注意詞數的要求。
【參考範文】
Dear Maria』,
How are you?
My life has changed a lot since I became a student of Grade 9. I used to have less homework and I could learn easily. However, everything is different now. I have a lot of homework to do every day. I’m under great pressure. I used to take part in all kinds of activities after school, but now I have to study all the time and sometimes even stay up late. I have given up my hobbies. What’s more, I used to spend the weekends with my family and friends. Now I have to take classes on weekends. I fell so unhappy. Do you feel the same?
Yours』,
Liu Mei
（二）
【參考範文】
Notice
The Students』 Union is going to organize a special activity next Sunday. Students feel stressed these days, I think the activity can make us relaxed. We can not only get along well with our classmates, but also know the culture of the city.
We』ll meet at the school gate at 7:30 am and take the bus to the East Lake, then we』ll go to the Yellow Crane Tower. We can enjoy the beautiful scenery. After that, we』ll go to Mulan Great Lake to have a picnic in the afternoon. We』ll take the bus back to school at 6:00 pm.
If you are interested in this activity, please sign your name before next Tuesday at 5pm. It’s also necessary for you to bring your ID card in order to buy tickets.
Wish you a wonderful time!
The Students』 Union
XX年XX月XX日
【亮點說明】
這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如is going to，make sb. relaxed，not only... but also，at the school gate，after that，have a picnic，take the bus back to school，interested in，in order to，Wish you a wonderful time等。而We can not only get along well with our classmates, but also know the culture of the city.，We』ll meet at the school gate at 7:30 am and take the bus to the East Lake, then we』ll go to the Yellow Crane Tower.，It’s also necessary for you to bring your ID card in order to buy tickets.等多種複雜句式的運用更是為文章增色不少。
（三）
【參考範文】
My dear friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds，but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, the brighter our future will become.
However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going on line to play games. It takes much of their spare time, so I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books，especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world. Let’s start reading now and let it become a part of our life.
【亮點說明】
that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.等多種句式的運用更是為文章增色不少，是本篇習作的亮點。