10篇英語經典範文,衝刺滿分!含得分策略

2020-12-17 騰訊網

為了更多同學在高考英語寫作中得到滿分,我們特精選了以下範文,希望同學們務必研讀背誦!(尤其注意:文中劃線部分為該體裁的套話; 黑體部分為寫作中的經典表達。)

一.參與報社等討論稿(帶手機利弊)

Dear Editor:

[引出話題]I’m a senior three student.I’m writing to tell you my opinion onwhethermiddle school students can go to school with mobile phones.[贊成]I think they can do that.Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.

[反對] However, every coin has 2 sides. There are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. What's more, some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.

[個人觀點] In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

二.看對照表格寫調查報告(孩子出國利弊)

[調查內容] A survey is taken onpublic opinions of the fact thatmany parents spend a large amount of money sending their children to study abroad, some of whom are middle school students.

[調查結果]From it we can see that38 percent of those surveyed thinkit is worth the money letting children study abroad to get a better education so that they can get pay in return in the future.However,not all are for it / some are against it.62% of themhold the view thatit is difficult for young people to live and study in a foreign country. It’s easy for them to fall / get into some bad habits and the cost of education in another country is ten times as much as that at home.

[解決措施]The survey shows thatthe government should set up different kinds of schools to meet the demands of different children.(句型do something /take measures / steps about sth.to do sth)

三.讀柱狀圖表寫調查報告[注意句式變換]

Middle school students have some ideas about their future jobs.

The most striking contrast isin teaching: 30percent of the girlswould like tobecome teachers while only 5percent of the boys want to do the job. 20 percent of the boyswant todo business and another 20 percent want to become lawyers, while girlsmake up15percent in these two fields. What boys like to do mostis tobecome managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists.Besides teaching, the second choice for girls isto be scientists and managers. The number is not small. Girlsalso expect toshow their abilities in these two fields.

四.寫信(過去/現在對比)

Dear editor,

I’m a middle school student.I once had a very happy family, but everything has changedbecause of my father.

Heused tobe a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients. He took good care of the family and shared the housework with my mother everyday.

However, he isnowquite a different person. He plays mahjong all night and often quarrels with my mother. I just can’t concentrate on my studies and my grades are coming down. I’m very much worried and I’m afraid it will destroy my family as well as my father.

Could you tell me what to do? I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.

Yours

Li Hua

五.圖畫+個人想法

One day during the summer holidays, I met my classmate Li Ming, whose nickname is Tao taopi. We chatted for a while as we walked. I asked him where he would go during the holidays. He replied that he had to stay at home studying. Then I』d like to know why he didn’t go out for a tour.Much to my surprise, he told me that it was just because he failed to be accepted by key universities.

In my opinion/Personally/ I think, traveling during the holidays not only increase a student’s knowledge of his or her motherland but also makes life meaningful.What’s more, at the present time, we students are suffering a lot both at home and school. Why not go out to get relaxed.

六.幽默畫

We want our schoolbags lighter

[圖畫內容]The picture shows usa schoolboy and a big woman. The boy is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy bag. The woman is taking some exercise. The boy is saying to the woman jokingly: 「Mum, if you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will easily lose weight….」

[社會實際]It’s quite common thatChinese students are overburdened with the lessons and homework. What we do every day is to listen to the teachers』 lectures, take notes and do our homework which seems endless.

[個人想法]We do hopeour teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way can we have time to do sports every day. Then we will be mentally and physically healthy.

七.補全圖畫

Yesterday afternoon I went to the park. It so happened that I saw a touching event.

At that time there were some people boating on the lake. A girl and her parents were taking photos. All of a sudden, the little girl fell into the lake as a result of carelessness. Obviously she couldn’t swim and was struggling in the water. Her parents cried for help. Hearing the cry, a young man immediately rushed to the bank and jumped into the water without taking off his clothes. He swam to the drowning girl and managed to push her to the bank.At last the girl was saved. The girl’s parents were very grateful to the young man. Many people were greatly moved by the young man’s deeds.

What a kind and brave young man!

八.廣播稿(看圖海嘯)

Boys and girls,

May I have your attention, please?At the end of 2004, a strong earthquakehitthe west part of Indonesia, which brought on a terrible tsunami to some areas of western Asia. This disaster has caused millions of deaths and destroyed many beautiful cities. How terrible things are!Besides, millions more who have become homeless are in great need of help now.

At present many countries all over the world including China have sent rescue teams there and thousands of people in every corner of the world are donating money to show their concern for them.

It is true that many natural disasters can’t be avoided sometimes. But at least we can do something to help the people in the tsunami-hit areas. So let’s offer our pocket money to them!Thank you.

九.通知

NOTICE

Tohelp students learn more about computers, we have invited Professor Wang from the Computer Department of Qinghua University to give us a lecture on Saturday, December 22nd. Professor will talk about the use of computer and how to learn through the Internet.

The lecture begins at 2;00pm in Room 204 of the Library Building. Any computer-loveris welcome toattend the lecture. Please bring your questions in computer learning. Professor Wang will leave you time for questions.

Don’t forget to be on time.

the Students』 Union

Dec. 19th, 2004

十.歡迎詞

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our school! Now let me introduce something aboutthe changes that have taken place in our class.

We used to listen and take notes in class, but had no time to think for ourselves. Because we were not interested in the lessons, we often felt sleepy while listening. After school we had to finish much homework, unable to have some sports.

However, things are different now.With the help of computers, the lessons are so lively and interesting that the students are active to answer the questions instead of falling asleep. As a result, we have made greater progress than before, though we spend less time doing our homework. And we can enjoy ourselves after class.

The good teaching method is popular with all of us. We will try our best to study even harder.

That’s all. Thank you!

高考英語作文滿分標準與寫作策略

一、滿分要求

1.語篇信息齊全;

2.豐富的句式表達;

3.注意句與句之間的連貫性;

4.語句流暢自然,層次清楚;

5.應用較高級詞彙;

6.書面整潔。

二、寫作策略

1.「五審」定調子

寫作時,要養成在審題上形成一種定向思維的習慣,做到「五審」:

一審體裁。根據作文材料要求確定文章體裁。然後建立相應體裁的行文模式。我們常用的體裁有書信、日記、通知、發言稿、說明文、記敘文、議論文等。

二審人稱。文章中人稱選擇恰當對表達文章的基本思想、描述事物及情節都很有幫助。應特別注意英文中人稱的陰陽是很容易被忽視的。

三審時態。高考評分中,謂語動詞形式是被看重的,一篇文章如果多處出現謂語動詞錯誤,就要降等給分。所以我們在審題時要給文章的時態定個位,即過去時、現在時或將來時。再以這個定為時態基礎,按需要使用相應時態。

四審要點。高考評卷中,作文的大塊得分集中在文章的要點和要點發揮上,一般來說,英語高考作文有4-6個要點,考生在讀題時要邊讀邊列出要點並寫出要點中的關鍵詞,這樣既能保證要點齊全又能節省時間。

五審層次。層次分明,脈絡清晰,讓讀者一目了然。記敘文大多數以人物活動、時間順序或事情發展過程為線索;說明文大多以時間、空間為線索;議論文的寫作一般按先總後分或先分後總的順序。

2.「韻色」得高分

培養學生在保證文體正確、要點齊全、層次分明的基礎上,恰當運用一些漂亮的句式、關聯詞、插入語和諺語等,能使文章更上檔次。

三、注意事項

1.提煉要點

(1)總結歸納要點:不是所有內容都要寫出來,而是抓住其中的關鍵要點、銜接要點!

(2)理順要點:將提煉的要點按邏輯關係(如時間關係、因果關係、轉折關係等)重新安排,這樣整篇文章看起來就整體有序,流暢自然,更加容易打動評分老師,從而使作文分數提升一檔。

2.遣詞造句

(1)遣詞

不出現語言錯誤;注意詞語和短語搭配使用;適度使用加分詞彙;避免詞語重複,以加分詞句:高級詞、同義詞、短語等替代。

(2)造句

表達意思要清楚無誤:具體化,細節化;多種表達方式表達相同含義;避免句式單調(簡單句、並列句、複合句等適度調整);可以用形象思維來表達(比如說你朗讀得「很好聽」,用「抑揚頓挫」來表達就是形象思維)。

3.謀篇布局

(1)構思文章提綱:根據題目的要點,安排好段落和主次關係。要形成良好的分段意識,寫作分段是必須要進行的(2至4段為佳),這樣顯得文章不會擁擠並且層次分明。在行文意識上,要注意突出要點。

(2)分段注意詳略搭配、注意連貫;

(3)行文時多用關聯詞、引導詞,把文章句子通過各種關係整合起來,達到起承轉合、運用自如的目的,從而獲取高分;

(4)具體的連接關係有:並列關係、遞進關係、因果關係、轉折關係、讓步關係、列舉關係、條件關係、舉例關係、時間關係等。

只看這字,都不好意思扣分!

好啦,同學們,有什麼想要的內容,可以在最下方留言哦!

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