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先自行「打臉」,託福寫作是不能直接套用模板的!ETS的e-rater自動評分系統不斷升級改造,它現在已經能識別網上絕大多數模板了,一旦你的作文被判定超過一定比率的重合度,就會被視為使用模板,從而認定是某種程度上的「作弊」行為,因此就會評為limited,壓低分數。這麼說的話,就是寫作不要指望靠模板了,那這篇文章是幹嘛的?!
先不要激動,不能套現成的模板,但是自己編一個不就行了嘛,多積累一些模板句式,隨意改編,千萬不要生搬硬套,聰明的人都是會鑽空子的~要知道,無論你用不用模板,英語寫作的框架思路基本都是如此。只要套路在,心中自有模板!具體如下,請查收。(僅獨立寫作)
Introduction引言
引言就是文章的首段,作為開頭部分,你需要表明這兩點:你的觀點是什麼?你為什麼支持這個觀點?這裡就要注意,開頭不可寫太多,兩三句話即可,很多同學喜歡在觀點闡釋上囉嗦一大堆,這不利於得分。只要清楚表達了這兩點,那就是一個完美的開頭段!
以下都是適合用在開頭的句型表達,為大家提供一個思路,供參考:1) Faced with...;quite a few people argue that...; But other people conceive differently.2) There is a general discussion today about the issue of....;Those who object to... argue that ...;They believe that...;But people who favor ..., on the other hand, argue that ...3) Currently there is a widespread concern that...4) Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...5) Now it is commonly held that ...;they think ...;But I doubt whether...6) Recently the issue of... has been brought to public attention.7) One of the great men once said that... Now more and more people share this belief.8) Until recently, ... has been regarded as.... But people are taking a fresh look at it.9) Sb. argues/maintains /holds/insists/believes that...10) More and more people are realizing /have come to realize...11) There is no denying/doubt that ...
Body主體
文章的主體一般都是包含三個段落,建議每一段都有一個中心思想來支持文章的中心論點,也就是所謂的分論點。闡述這個分論點,然後再舉例說明。
也就是說,這三個主體段落每一段又可以分為兩個部分:分論點闡述+舉例分析。如果沒有分論點怎麼辦,那就用三個例子證明一個中心論點,不過最好還是列出分論點來,這樣顯得你的文章更有深度、邏輯性更強。咱們可以舉個例子來說明。(1)段落中心思想:It took incredible courage for an African American woman to make such a bold stance in 1955 Alabama.在1995年的阿拉巴馬,一位黑人女性要做出如此的舉動需要十足的勇氣。(2)論據舉例:This act took place in an era when African Americans could be arrested and face severe retribution for committing the most trivial acts of defiance.在那個的年代,美國黑人做出的任意微小的反抗都可能導致逮捕以及嚴重的懲罰。在進一步闡述證據支撐論點以後,就要用一些過渡詞銜接到下一段。主體部分的所有段落都應遵循這一模式:論點、證據支撐、過渡。
主要過渡詞有以下這些:moreover furthermore 此外in fact 事實上on the whole 總體來看as a result 結果是simply put 簡單地說for this reason 因此similarly likewise 同樣的it follows that 接著naturally 自然地by comparison 相反surely 當然yet 但是……另外,用於引出論據的一些句式,吃不胖也為大家整理到這幾種:1) We may cite/quote/take a single/common example to illustrate...2) Our society abounds with the examples of ...3) A recent study indicates/suggests/shows that...4) According to the statistics provided by..., it can be seen that...5) There is good/sufficient evidence to show that...6) This brings out/set forth the important fact that ...7) No one can ignore/overlook the fact that...
Conclusion總結
最後一段用來總結你的觀點,重新證實你的中心論點。你要指出中心論點,這裡就不用再舉例證明了。切記,開頭和結尾雖然寫的內容少,但對你的分值影響很大!
適合結尾的句型也有很多,如下:1) From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that ...2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on ...3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of ..., if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ..., but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.7) There is little doubt/denying that ...8) It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of...require immediate attention.9) As far as ... be concerned, I believe/think that ...10) In conclusion,...11) In my opinion, I am in favor of ...12) Personally, I prefer to...13) In short,... should learn to...; Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.14) As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that...有了以上這些句式模板,按照各自的套路,立馬就能湊出來好幾種模板,當然,如果你還是拼湊不出來,沒關係,這裡再為大家提供幾個整體框架模板參考,切忌套用!!!
1. A or B選擇型When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________.A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________.Futhermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________.Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此處論述 B 的 1-2 優 點 ___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.
2. Agree or disagree型Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a_____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解釋本段中心___________.Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.What is more, some students are interested in____________.In a word, ________________.3. 單一命題型The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.Futhermore,______________.In short,_________________複述前文中的理由______________.最後,使用自己的模板寫完後初稿後,重新瀏覽一遍首段中提出的中心論點,再通讀一遍文章,看看行文是否流暢。建議讓專業老師為你批改,當然,參加模擬考試也不失為一個好方法哦!
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