1.開場白也很有門道:
正規寫法,如學校寫給Harry Potter,就是Dear Mr. Potter,
熟人寫法,如小天狼星寫給Harry Potter,就是Dear Harry,
親密寫法,如赫敏寫給Harry Potter,就是Hi Harry,
不知名寫法,如Harry Potter寫給學校,就是To whom it may concern
其實,在歪果仁看來,郵件中最常用的就是HI,Dear反而會覺得過於親暱,但一定不要用HELLO開頭,會看起來非常的詭異~
2.如果是回覆郵件,可以先表謝意:
Thank you for your prompt reply.
Thanks for getting back to me.感謝你的回覆!
Thank you for contacting our company.感謝聯繫我們。
3.如果是發送郵件,直接切入主題:
I am writing to enquire about…我想問一下……
I am writing in reference to…關於……我想說……
4.為了使正文簡潔、有條理,可以用:
連接詞如first、second、next、finally;數字如1.2.3.4.項目符號如●
5.補充,二次感謝或期待回信:
Thank you for your patience and cooperation.謝謝你的耐心和配合。
I look forward to hearing from you.期待你的回信。
If you have any other questions please feel free to contact me.
If you have any questions or concerns, don't hesitate to let me know.如有任何問題,請隨時聯繫我。
6.結束語
Best regards,
Sincerely,
Cheers,
END
注意事項請多多收集開場白與結束語,郵件總是千篇一律也讓人看得很不耐煩。還有更多英文郵件寫作技巧,本篇可作為參考。
用在句首的:
帶到之前討論
Pertain to ...(issue)
As communicated earlier...
回復晚了
Sorry for the delayed response...
很久沒聯繫
Hope everything is well with you.
I hope this email finds you doing well.
句中:
請求對方做某件事
Please arrange...
accordingly so we canproceed with...
move forward
Please follow up with...
更委婉的請求
If possible could you please...
I will have to bother you on...
和對方確認某件事
Could you please clarify.../give aclarification on...
Kindly please confirm on ourproposed...(schedule/plan)
詢問進展
Do you have any updates on...
Have you got any response from...
通知對方某件事
Please be informed that...
Please kindly note that...
徵詢對方意見
Please advise.
Please let me know your thought on this.
Please give your comments if any.
會議邀請
You are all invited to attend the meetingon...
Please check your calendar and let me knowyour preference/if there is any conflict.
結束:
...is attached here for your reference.
Thanks for your kind support.
Please let me know should you have anyfurther questions.
Your prompt response on this will be highlyappreciated.
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