「CET-6作文」Old People's Problem

【CET-6段首句作文】Old People&39;s Problem in 3 paragraphs. You are given the first sentence of each paragraph and are required to develop its idea in completing the paragraph. Write no less than 160 words, not including the given words in each paragraph.

1.Nowadays, old people&39;s problem is not given due stress.

3.How can we solve old people&39;s Problem

Nowadays, old people&39;s problem. Although they face such serious problems, they do not receive wide attention either from their families or from society. The middle-aged people care more about their careers, their children and their living conditions than about their parents. Society also seems to have a lot of other important welfares to pay attention to. So old people become a forgotten group.

How can we solve old people&39;t be treated as a burden of family or society. They have wisdom and precious experience. They can give young people valuable advice. So young people should take up the duty of taking care of them and respect them, which is always a good quality of Chinese people. They should employ part of their spare time to be with their parents. As for those old men without sons or daughters, such institutions⑦ as Old People's Home should be set up to give the old men good care.

【注釋】

①prominent: 顯著的, 突出的

②emergence: 出現

③nuclear family: 核心家庭

④inevitably: 不可避免地

⑤pension: 養老金, 退休金

⑥financial help: 資助

⑦institution: 公共機構

【簡評】

這是一篇根據段首句展開的議論文。段首句作文是指命題者將每各個段落的第一句話給出作為提示。該句實際上就是各段的主題句，考生應仔細審題，從提示中確立全文的主題思想和行文思路，再用清楚準確的語言表達出來。

本文首段用列舉法說明老年人的問題變得日益突出。第二段用因果法證明老年人問題還未得到應有的重視。尾段用分類法說明解決這一問題的辦法：青年人應該尊重、贍養老人；對於孤寡老人，應當開設敬老院對他們進行照顧。

這篇文章最突出的特點是綜合運用多種論述方式，因而說理明晰、透徹。文筆灑脫，富於變化，是其另一特色。

資料來源：新大學英語四、六級考點透視叢書：六級寫作/李華田主編，武漢大學出版社，2006