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【科技類】
Now children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time doing sports, why is this? Do you think it is a negative or positive development? 現在,孩子花費很多時間在電腦遊戲上而不是做運動?為什麼,你認為是積極的還是消極的?(2015年3月31日)
【寫作點評】
雅思寫作有四種經典提問角度:利弊討論、分析問題解決問題、兩種觀點討論、是否同意一種觀點。2016年3月31日雅思寫作為綜合提問,任務指令要求先分析原因,再利弊討論。
【小鵬哥3月31日雅思寫作預測回顧】
【科技類】
A study shows that a lot of children, from the age 7 to 11, spend too much time watching television or playing video games. How do you think this problem influence the children, their families and the society? What measures should be taken to solve it ? 研究顯示,7 歲到 11 歲的年輕人花費太多時間看電視,玩遊戲,這對於孩子,家庭和社會的影響何在? 應該如何解決?
【頭腦風暴】
① 笑笑三歲,三歲的笑笑特別喜歡玩I-pad的街機三國遊戲,他知道張飛、關羽、趙雲、李典、肥肥等人物。遊戲給他帶來感官快樂的同時,也危害到他的健康。因此,爸爸會嚴格控制他的遊戲時間,我更喜歡帶著他登玉皇山。
② 我們已從網際網路時代進入到無線網際網路時代。手機遊戲或者電腦遊戲成為年輕人放鬆娛樂的重要方式之一。遊戲是一把雙刃刀,對於玩家而言,在放鬆消遣的同時,也耽誤了寶貴的時間,影響了學習和工作。
【思路拓展】
鼓勵孩子們玩遊戲的利好:
① 豐富多彩的遊戲節目成為很多學生緩解壓力,釋放情緒的一種有效方式。設想,孩子們在校努力學習,課後讀補習班,作業繁重,鮮有大量的時間休閒娛樂,玩遊戲可令學生們暫時忘記現實生活中的煩惱和壓力。
② 一些競技類的遊戲其實是鍛鍊玩家的反應能力和布局能力的,因此,學生玩家也會培養多方面能力,例如手眼並用,危機處理,團隊協作等。
③ 有些遊戲的設計,以學習為導向,寓教於樂,讓玩家在娛樂中學習知識,這也可以提高他們的學習效率,激發他們的學習熱情。
鼓勵孩子們玩遊戲的弊端:
① 學生們的主要任務是學習知識,考慮到孩子們的自律性較差,允許孩子們玩優秀容易使他們分散精力,耽誤學習。
② 過度沉迷遊戲有害健康,具體而言,玩家會視力下降,養成懶惰和久坐的生活習慣,不願從事戶外運動,因而導致肥胖。然而,戶外運動是更好的方式放鬆身心,提高學習效率。
③ 少兒不宜的遊戲內容是精神鴉片。暴力,色情,血腥的信息,對於成長中的年輕人而言,毒害其心靈,誤導人生觀,誘發暴力衝動,導致校園欺凌或少年犯罪的上升,可能會危害社會。
【範文賞析】
【首段】 背景介紹 + 寫作目的
Computer games like many other prevailing entertaining activities are look down upon by many parents as time-wasters. However, it is true that video games have been exerting a peculiar fascination on a great many people young players. Perhaps that is why many teenagers prefer to play on-line games rather than embark on physical exercises in their spare time. This essay aims to explore the reasons why on-line games have such charm on the young and discuss the pros and cons of computer games.
【二段】 電腦遊戲流行的原因
The reasons why on-line games enjoy tremendous popularity are manifold. The most essential reason why numerous children are keen on playing computer games is that many games are well-designed, in other words, many games are characteristic of melodious music, stunning plots and vivid pictures, thereby, teenage players are easily attracted. Another reason is that many children are eager to relax for a while via playing their favorite games, especially when they are burdened with academic study.
【三段】電腦遊戲對少年玩家的利好
Seen from the positive aspects, children can become the beneficiaries of computer games if they can play them in a proper way. First, some mental techniques trained by video games include: quick reaction, teamwork strategy, crisis-solving abilities, hand-eye coordination and so on. This kind of goal-driving experience will influence the players』 future life positively. Also, proper game time can, to some extent, help teenagers reduce pressure. Imaginably, the study efficiency can be improved if one can vent his or her negative emotions. Last, some learning-oriented games can still facilitate students』 study, it is a good thing if players can acquire knowledge in a relaxing way.
【四段】電腦遊戲對少年玩家的弊端
Sure enough, some problems invariably ensue if children excessively indulge in the computer games. First, violent video games are always blamed by the media as the reason why some teenage players become aggressive and even conduct some anti-social offenses. Also, the craziness about games is physically detrimental because players tend to reduce physical activities, thus, the sedentary lifestyle would increase the likelihood of obesity. Last, many parents are worried that the study will be delayed. The sole task of students is to update their knowledge. Youngsters will regret it for the rest of their lives provided that they fail to draw on their precious youth.
【尾段】亮明觀點
In closing,whether the impacts that computer games exert on players are positive or negative largely depends on how students treat games. There are many benefits for people to play video games, as for children, they should control the time,excessive indulgence is unwise.
【經典語料】
1. Video games have been exerting a peculiar fascination on a great many people young player. 一直以來,電子遊戲都對年輕的玩家極有吸引力。
2. Some problems invariably ensue 一些問題隨之而來
3. conduct some anti-social offenses 做出一些反社會行為
4. The study will be delayed 學習會被耽誤
5. This kind of goal-driving experience will influence the players』 future life positively. 以目標為驅動的經歷會在未來對玩家產生積極的影響。
6. The study efficiency can be improved if one can vent his or her negative emotions. 如果一個人可以釋放其不良情緒,學習效率也會提高。
7. Some learning-oriented games can still facilitate students』 study 一些以學習為導向的遊戲也會輔助學業。
8. Whether the impacts that computer games exert on players are positive or negative largely depends on how students treat games. 玩遊戲的影響是積極還是消極,很大程度上取決於玩家對待它們的方式。
9. spend great amounts of time in playing computer games 花費大量的時間玩遊戲
10. spend a great deal of time on playing on-line games花費大量的時間玩遊戲
11. Virtually, children can become the beneficiaries of on-line games 實際上,孩子們可以成為在線遊戲的受益者
12. However, on the downsides, …… will have a really adverse impact on sb 然而,從消極的角度看,…… 將會對某人施加不良的影響
13. Also, …… is physically detrimental ……是有害健康的
14. Last,students usually have a hard time in zeroing in on study if they indulge in computer games 如果學生沉迷遊戲,他們很難專注於學習。
15. Seen from the perspective of health,excessive game time is health-threatening 從健康角度而言,長時間玩遊戲有害健康。
【作者介紹】
薛鵬(雅思小鵬哥),新東方網專欄作家,長春市作家協會會員。高中時代出版詩文集《選擇堅強》,每年創作20萬字原創語料庫以及範文。吉林大學外國語言學及應用語言學碩士。17年英語教學經驗 (7年新東方雅思託福SAT教學經歷),前長春新東方功勳教師,多次培訓出雅思和託福高分學員(雅思寫作8.0分,託福寫作29分)。
愛生活,愛運動,愛音樂電影,愛旅行美食,愛讀書攝影,更愛英語教學。20歲登上英語講臺,主講英語萬詞速記課程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各級別詞彙教學。
大一時即在報刊雜誌上主持「英語學習系列談」以及「薛鵬教你學單詞」等專欄。2006年獲得「外研社/朗文杯」新概念背誦大賽吉林省賽區大學成人組冠軍,全國總決賽大學成人組二等獎。
對於各類寫作課程有精深研究,授課方式行雲流水,妙語連珠,知識底蘊深厚,對學員極具有啟迪性和激勵性。
教學理念:Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注滿一桶水,而是點燃一把火)
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