考研英語(二)的大作文寫作主要考察圖表作文的形式。
圖表作文的首段主要為「數據描述」,主要體現在兩種形式:相同事物寫變化+不同事物寫對比。
二、三段內容比較靈活,寫作時可以從現象、原因、危害、建議等多個角度展開分析。
以下的功能句,既能用於整篇作文的開篇,亦可用於第二、三段的寫作,此外小作文中的表達也完全可用於大作文寫作,這些功能句通過邏輯關係排序、連接起來其實就組合成一篇作文。
1. 圖表綜述
這是一個柱狀圖,清晰展示了某高校2013年和2018年本科畢業生去向方面的明顯差異。
This is a column chart, clearly illustrating the striking contrasts in graduates』 career paths in a certain university between 2013 and 2018.
所給的是一個餅狀圖,清晰展示了2017年某城市消費者在選擇餐廳考慮因素方面存在顯著差異。
This is a pie chart which clearly illustrates the striking contrasts in the factors customers consider when choosing restaurants in a certain city in 2017.
所給是一幅柱狀圖,清晰展示了中國某城市居民春節消費方面的對比。
There is a column chart which clearly illustrates the striking contrasts in the consumption of residents during the Spring Festival in a certain city of China.
2. 數據上升:
然而,選擇升學的畢業生比例明顯上升,從26.3%增長到34%。同時,創業的畢業生比例從1.3%增長到了2.6%。
However, there was a sharp increase in the proportion of those who chose to further their study, from 26.3% to 34.0%. Meanwhile, the percentage of graduates who started own business ascended from 1.3% to 2.6%.
自此之後,數據開始飆升,最終在2008年達到了40億的峰值。
Since then, it surged remarkably, reaching the peak at 4 billion in 2008.
3. 數據穩定:
2007年和2008年,數據穩定在10億。
The number maintained stable at 1 billion in 2007 and 2008.
4. 佔比/排序:
新年禮物的花銷是最大的比重,達到了40%;其後是交通和聚餐,均佔20%。
The expense on gifts for the New Year is the largest proportion, accounting for 40%. Then the next are fees on transportation and gathering dinners, with the same 20%.
最後出現的是其他所有花費的綜合,20%。
Finally comes the total expenditure on others, at 20%.
5. 圖表聯繫主旨
這樣的場景能自然聯繫到世界手機產業的迅速發展。但什麼導致了以上差異?在我看來,至少兩個原因可以解釋這種現象。
Such a scenario can be naturally associated with the speedy advancement of cell phone industry in the world. But what resulted in the differences above? At least two reasons can account for this phenomenon.
這種場景能自然聯繫到…的流行/重要性/激烈競爭。
Such a scene can be naturally associated with the popularity/ significance / fierce competition ….
We can naturally associated such a scene with the popularity /significance / fierce competition ...
6. ……的特徵是
一方面,近幾年發展中國家的突出特點就是經濟的迅速發展,這使得很多當地居民有了額外的錢購置手機這項服務。典型例子就是中國。
For one thing, in recent years, developing countries were characterized by the prosperity and boom in economy, which enabled residents there to possess additional money to afford the cell phone service. A case in point is China.
一方面,大學畢業生的特徵就在於他們已經是成年人,需要工作來獨立養活自己。這使得大學中的大多數年輕人畢業後去找工作。
For one thing, college graduates are featured by the fact that they have become adults and need jobs to support themselves independently. This enables a majority of youngsters in college to seek jobs after graduation.
7. 對比:
另一方面,與發展中國家相比,發達國家居民更加富裕且人口規模較小;因此,一大部分比例的人們若干年前就已經購買了手機。
For another, compared with developing countries, citizens in developed nations were wealthier and their population was smaller. Therefore, a large proportion of people there purchase mobile phones years ago.
8. 排比:
出國留學帶給年輕人更多機會,喚起他們對外國文化的熱情,幫助他們拓寬視野。
Studying abroad/Overseas study brings young people more opportunities, arouses their enthusiasm for foreign cultures and helps them broaden their horizons.
9. 建議
因此,手機製造商應更多關注發展中國家的市場。
Accordingly, it is essential for cell phone manufacturers to focus more eyesight on the huge market in developing countries.
制定綜合策略
同時,他們應制定綜合性策略提升汽車的質量和售後服務。
Meanwhile, it is advisable for them to work out comprehensive strategies to strengthen the quality of cars and after-sale service.
展望未來
如果他們能盡全力這樣來做,手機產業的明天將一片光明。
Provided that they try their utmost to do so, the future of the cell industry will be hopeful.
提出建議
無論每個部分的花銷是否理性,重要的是人們享受了新年的喜慶氛圍。
Whether each part of the expense is rational or not, it is of great significance for people to enjoy the joyous atmosphere of the new year.
10. 個人觀點和選擇
作為一名大學生,我正在準備研究生入學考試。我相信研究生學習會帶給我更好的就業機會,喚起我對學術研究的熱情,幫助我拓寬視野。
As a college student, I am preparing for the national entrance examination for postgraduate. I deem that studying as a postgraduate may bring me better job opportunities, arouse my enthusiasm for academic research and help me to broaden my horizon.
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好好努力,好好加油,等到你們拿到錄取通知的時刻,記得微博或微信告知一下,給你們分配男/女朋友,送你們碩士入學!!
(記得誇我,歡迎各種轉載/讚賞)
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