Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some hobbies are relatively easy (相對輕鬆), while others (some和other成對出現) present more of a challenge (更具挑戰性). Personally, I believe that both types of hobby (兩種類型的愛好) can be fun, and I therefore disagree with the statement that (不同意) hobbies need to be difficult in order to (為了) be enjoyable.
On the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies. One example of (一個例子是) an activity that is easy for most people is swimming. This hobby requires (這個愛好需要) very little equipment (非常少的裝備), it is simple to learn (易學), and it is inexpensive (不貴). I remember learning (記得曾經做過的事) to swim at my local swimming pool (當地的遊泳池) when I was a child, and it never felt like a demanding or challenging experience (覺得是一次要求高的或者有挑戰的經驗). Another hobby that I find easy and fun (覺得簡單而有趣) is photography. In my opinion, anyone can take interesting pictures (拍下有趣的照片) without knowing too much about (不許了解很多) the technicalities of operating a camera (操作相機的技術細節). Despite being straightforward (直截了當), taking photos (做主語v-ing) is a satisfying activity (令人滿意的活動).
On the other hand, difficult hobbies can sometimes be more exciting. If an activity is more challenging, we might feel a greater sense of satisfaction (感到更大的滿足感) when we manage to do (勉力完成) it successfully. For example, film editing (電影剪輯) is a hobby that requires a high level of knowledge and expertise (相當高水平的知識和技藝). In my case, it took me around two years before I became competent at (勝任) this activity, but now I enjoy it much more than I did when I started. I believe that many hobbies give us more pleasure (給我們帶來快樂) when we reach a higher level of performance (達到更高水平的表現) because the results are better and the feeling of achievement is greater. (比較級+比較級 越...就越...)
In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing (有趣和放鬆的), but difficult hobbies can be equally pleasurable (同樣令人愉悅的) for different reasons (因為不同的原因).
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Notice that we used examples as the basis of both main paragraphs.
中文翻譯
有些人認為業餘愛好很難讓人愉快。你在多大程度上同意或不同意？(注意學習破題的方法)
一些愛好相對容易，而另一些則更具挑戰性。我認為這兩種愛好都是有趣的，因此我不同意愛好需要困難才能令人愉快。
一方面，許多人喜歡輕鬆的愛好。一個對大多數人來說很容易的活動是遊泳。(後面提供證據說明為什麼容易)這個愛好需要很少的設備，它簡單易學，而且還便宜。我記得當我還是個孩子的時候，我在當地的遊泳池裡學習遊泳，我從沒覺得這事要求很高或很有挑戰性的。另一個我覺得簡單有趣的愛好是攝影。在我看來，任何人都可以拍攝有趣的照片，而不必太了解操作相機的技術細節。儘管很直截了當，但拍照是一項令人滿意的活動。
另一方面，困難的愛好有時更令人興奮。如果一項活動更具挑戰性，當我們成功地完成，我們可能會感到更大的滿足感。例如，電影剪輯是需要高水平的知識和專業知識。我花了大約兩年的時間才能夠勝任這項活動，但現在我比剛開始時更喜歡它。我相信當我們達到更高的表現水平時，許多愛好會給我們帶來更多的快樂，因為結果更好，成就感更強。
總之，簡單的愛好可以是有趣的和放鬆的，但是困難的愛好同樣可以因為不同的原因而令人愉悅。
Some hobbies are ... (相對輕鬆), while others (some和other成對出現) ... (更具挑戰性). Personally, I believe that ... (兩種類型的愛好) can be fun, and ... (不同意) hobbies need to be difficult in order to (為了) be enjoyable.
On the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies. ... (一個例子是) an activity that is easy for most people is swimming. ... (這個愛好需要) very ... (非常少的裝備), it is ... (易學), and it is ... (不貴). I remember learning (記得曾經做過的事) to swim at my ... (當地的遊泳池) when I was a child, and it never ... (覺得是一次要求高的或者有挑戰的經驗). Another hobby that I find ... (覺得簡單而有趣) is photography. In my opinion, anyone can ... (拍下有趣的照片) ... (不許了解很多) the ... (操作相機的技術細節). Despite being ... (直截了當), taking photos (做主語v-ing) is a ... (令人滿意的活動).
On the other hand, difficult hobbies can sometimes be more exciting. If an activity is more challenging, we might ... (感到更大的滿足感) when we ... (勉力完成) it successfully. For example, ... (電影剪輯) is a hobby that requires ... (相當高水平的知識和技藝). In my case, it took me around two years before I became ... (勝任) this activity, but now I enjoy it much more than I did when I started. I believe that many hobbies ... (給我們帶來快樂) when we ... (達到更高水平的表現) because the results are better and the feeling of achievement is greater. (比較級+比較級 越...就越...)
In conclusion, simple hobbies can be ... (有趣和放鬆的), but difficult hobbies can be ... (同樣令人愉悅的) ... (因為不同的原因).