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思維導圖在英語作文寫作中的應用實例
寫作流程：
1. 審題、理清思路：考慮寫什麼(挑選關鍵詞，搭建作文框架)。
2. 選擇詞語：根據話題和作文框架選用所需要的語料(詞塊和語塊)。
3. 遣詞造句：根據思維導圖中的語料，用合適的句型寫作。
4. 語篇定稿：根據思維導圖修改潤色作文——緊扣主題、表達準確，關聯自然，語篇流暢。
實例1：
假如你有兩位同學——芳芳和明明，參加了上星期二學校組織的英語演講比賽，他們的不同表現使你深有感觸。請你根據下列表各中的內容提示寫一篇英語短文。
參考詞彙：英語演講比賽 English Speech Contest
要求：
1. 詞數：80~100個
2. 短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數
3. 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發揮
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought__________________.
範文1
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought her English was the best. So shespent lots of time picking some beautiful clothes for herself instead of trying to work hard at English for the contest. As a result, she didn't do well in the contest because she hadn't got ready for the contest.
But Mingming was different from Fangfang. He worked hard at Englishand asked others for help. Especially, his leg was hurt two days before the contest, but he never gave up. In the end, he won the contest.
No doubt, from Mingming we should learn : No pains, No gains. From now on, I mush learn fromMingming.
範文2
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought she was good at English, and that she didn't need to spend more time on the contest at all. She alwaysconsidered picking some beautiful clothes for the contest. But Mingming was different. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Though he had hurt his leg two days before the contest, he never gave up.
In the end, Fangfang didn't get ready well enough. At the contest, she was so nervous that she she failed. But Mingming won because of his efforts.
In my opinion, we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and make progress every day.
範文3
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought that she was good at English. So it wasn't necessary to spend lots of time preparing for the contest. What she only thought was what clothes should wear, which make herself more beautiful at the contest. At last, she was too nervous to finish the contestbecause she didn't get ready very well.
Instead, Mingming had been working at English and asking others for help. What's more, he had hurt his leg two days before the contest. But he had never given up. As the result, he won the contest.
I think we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and never give up.
實例2：
生活是豐富多彩的，沒有愛好的人生是不完整的人生。親愛的同學，在生活中，你有什麼興趣愛好嗎?這個興趣愛好是怎樣培養起來的?它給你的生活增添了哪些色彩?請你以 「My Hobby」為題，結合自己的親身經歷寫一篇短文。(詞數80個左右)
要求：
1.語句通順，合乎邏輯，書寫規範。2.文中不得出現真實的姓名和學校名稱。
範文1
Reading is my hobby. When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I was moved deeply by the girl.From then on I became interested in reading books.
Reading can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can also solve many problems for me.
In a word, reading books can make my life colorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.
範文2
My favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema, I was attracted by the beautiful sights. It was so creative that it made me enjoy a lot. From then on, I became a movie fan.
Now, when I am tired, I go to the cinema. When I am happy, I go to the cinema, too. On the one hand, movies can make me relaxed. On the other hand, I can learn lots of knowledge from movies.